 willam and jack and jake 5/5/12 . chapter 1nice |
 PhoungSeppuku 10/14/11 . chapter 1i like this, very much. :3 well done. well done, randomsomeone |
 Sepsis 8/2/11 . chapter 1Wow! |
 Shu of the Wind 1/25/11 . chapter 1The adjusted rock-paper-scissors premise was FABULOUS. I liked it muchly.
Also, characterization was an A, description was A. I liked the Shukaku line: "Put out his pretty pinwheel Uchiha eyes." That was just awesome. |
 TheReviewer101 1/3/11 . chapter 1I think this is one of the fics that made me want to have an account here. it is really well written and made me think it was from the manga itself |
 helium-kiss 9/2/10 . chapter 1Loved this little one-shot, great job! |
 Lithium-Flower567 4/3/10 . chapter 1Really interesting take on their relationship ) love it |
 TillyMe 1/10/10 . chapter 1wonderful. truly wonderful:) |
 delicate.desires 9/16/08 . chapter 1Awesome one-shot! I enjoyed reading it. |
 Okuyukashii 8/9/08 . chapter 1I like it, and how Gaara considers the metaphor. Great job! |
 mewantpancake 7/31/08 . chapter 1I loved it it'scute how they match up to their teachers too |
 Nami-Lass 6/14/08 . chapter 1i like it! its strange, confusing and intellectual! i love it! |
 DarkenedSakura 6/13/08 . chapter 1It's been ages since I've read a Naruto fic - I don't really keep up with the series any more and haven't for years - but I saw this in someone's list of favorites and it got me curious. And wow, well done indeed. Excellent weaving of writing around this idea, and despite the nature of that 'triangle', Gaara just fits in so well here. If I say any more I'd just be babbling, so...adding to my faves, great job! |
 a thousand cranes 4/26/08 . chapter 1I added this story to my favorites a while ago, but I don't think I ever reviewed. haha Well better late then never.
I really do love this. I love how you portrayed Gaara's standoffish personality and then Sakura's caring and still professional one. Shukaku's little actions in Gaara's head is quite amusing also and it was very realistic. Having Gaara's point of view and observations was a very good idea on this matter and so was using the whole slug beats snake analogy. It was very original
"Nothing indicated everything and everything indicated nothing." That's my favorite line. |
 HawaiianCaffeine 4/19/08 . chapter 1don't really know what to say
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interesting i suppose .
rock on and payce out |