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| a thousand cranes 2008-04-26 ch 1,  | abuseI added this story to my favorites a while ago, but I don't think I ever reviewed. haha Well better late then never. I really do love this. I love how you portrayed Gaara's standoffish personality and then Sakura's caring and still professional one. Shukaku's little actions in Gaara's head is quite amusing also and it was very realistic. Having Gaara's point of view and observations was a very good idea on this matter and so was using the whole slug beats snake analogy. It was very original "Nothing indicated everything and everything indicated nothing." That's my favorite line. |
| alana124pyro 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abusedon't really know what to say ... interesting i suppose ^.^ rock on and payce out |
| kazema 2008-02-27 ch 1, | abusei like the analysis, and i like this story as well. great work. |
| imanokie01 2008-02-17 ch 1, | abuseThat was freakin awesome. How you portayed team sevens relationship and the hint of longing still in Sakura. Then to show the way she has changed and a chance of finding the strength to no longer need Sasuke. And how Gaara thinks. Just too awesome for words. |
| Animeprincess514 2008-02-13 ch 1, | abuseso cute! |
| beyond the darkness 2008-02-04 ch 1, | abusewow, that ending sure sticks with you, a little needle that needs to start poking at the naruto plot writers an enjoyable thought provoking BELIEVABLE story :) |
| Silver Night Fox 2007-12-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is a really interesting oneshot- to me it looks like the perfect first chapter to a story. ...A very interesting Garra and Sakura romance story. I don't know if you will continue it, or turn it into a longer story, but if you do I would be very willing to read and/or beta it if you want. But either way- this one shot is still very interesting, keep up the writing! |
| AlaskenWildflower 2007-11-20 ch 1, | abuseit was ok |
| itstehchibiness 2007-10-26 ch 1, | abusevery very nice story :D i liked it very much |
| Drip Dry 2007-06-25 ch 1, | abusehn, that was certainly very well written and interesting. A must fave. :) |
| Zencry 2007-06-04 ch 1, | abusecute. |
| Sy 2007-05-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw...its so sweet. I wish there was a sequel but then the ending might not be as strong and sweet as this one. *hearts hearts all over* Keep up the good work! |
| sasukekun'sgirl16 2007-05-05 ch 1, | abuseKyaa! That made me say, "Oh, how cute!" I loved it! Thank you! |
| hzlgrl204 2007-05-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really like this. It's Gaara-esq, (i'm a horrible speller both in french and english, random warning) and cute and slightly... not insane or agressive, but... gaara-ish, which is better than many GaaSaku writers cna do in a one shot! I love your stories, they're great, btw, lol. |
| Ash 2007-04-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like, nicely palyful and yet with just enough tenseness to make it drawing. One of the few one-shots I've liked in over five years of reading on |