Wow! That was so cute! I loved it! Seriously, if you write like this when you're tired, I can only imagine how great your stories are when you're fully awake! :D
Definitely a favorite.

Oh, wow... that was sad, sweet, and heart warming all in one. This was great! Wow... I'm just amazed. lol! I mean, this was awesome... lol. Poor Estel.. he couln't glow, but he does glow. That was a great idea and it was well written. Hannon le for sharing your talent.

~KerowynGreenleaf~

~Member of Counil of Elrond~

AW! So cute! ^__^

aw... I really loved this - it was so cute, yet very believable

Just found your story and loved it. 22 hours and no sleep? Are you still sleeping? didn't notice anything to lead me to think no sleep

You were tired writing this, it's a lovely story.
Short but oh so sweet, thank you.
Isa

ROTFLMAO!! I'm sorry, but even though poor Estel did get hurt and it was a dramatic moment, IT WAS SO FUNNY!! He actaully lit himself on fire! Heh, i'm a piro so that explains the hysteria, but ya. This was a very enjoyable story.

Aw ^_^ So cute! :P Keep up the great work ^_^
Namarie!

~*~Elenmeoi~*~

What a cute story! I especially enjoyed the wat Legolas interacted with a very young, and rather upset, Estel. Good work!

GREAT FIC! sorry I couldn't review yesterday, the computer wouldn't let me...sigh. It was a great ending too!

Aww... That was just *too* cute! Loved it :D

It was coherent! Some of your tenses got a little switched around, but hey other than that it was great! It was a nice little tale! Very very good! I enjoyed it greatly! Keep up the great work!

That was one of the sweetest stories I've ever read. Poor little kid. And knowing the minds of children, perfectly within the realm of possibility. Very touching, my friend.

Hi Gwenneth
I wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed your story and I hope you will write more. I like the idea of Legolas being able to comfort a young Estel. It was a very sweet story. I don't think it needs edited or if it did I didn't notice because I was so caught up in reading it.

Regards

Gillian

I think it was well done by someone with a complete lack of sleep! Possibly some punctuation or spacing typos, but the story was overall solid. I like it much and hope that you might find other instances to write about - after you've gotten some sleep!