I love this a lot. It has a lot of emotion. And that last line was especially masterful. A thumbs up for you!

Wow. This was really intense and made you think a lot about Typhoid Mary in a different light. Excellent job.

Sweet I love it. You should write more. It turned out really great.

Wow...extremely well written, very short and very unexpected. It shows a side of Typhoid Mary that nobody sees. Good fic, keep up the good work!