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lowo-chan
2008-06-26
ch 1,
abuseI love how emotional your fics are! I'm so addicted, I swear. X3
I think I could re-read this...
LetsRuinTheEnding
2008-06-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseBitterwseet with not too much bitter. Loved it!
PrettyLilJewGirl
2008-04-09
ch 1,
abuseOMG. I am going on a 'read-fletset-fics' run and wow, EVERY STORY IS BETTER THAN THE PREVIOUS ONE! Seriousleh.:)
I love how you characterize Stan so well... he's like a real person. AND I LOVED THE TWIST AT THE END.
BulletprufZombie
2008-03-16
ch 1,
abuseVery well written... and sexy! :) I liked the whole twisted idea of Stan paying for Kyle. Just goes to show how stupid people can be when they're in love. And being drunk means you can deny anything.
Nice.
Jem x
Indiana Beach Bum
2007-01-20
ch 1,
abuseSo wait. Let me process this. It was Kyle's intent to go out looking for Stan all those nights because he had asked Kenny to get him drunk? To have an excuse to make out with Stan? Am I getting that right?

I KNEW there was a reason I liked this one and it stood out as one my faves from you. The whole concept...Stan falling in love with Kyle and only being able to get him when he knew he wouldn't remember it...but Kyle's intention to get him when he knew Stan would think he wouldn't remember it. Ha, how did Kyle find out Stan was paying Kenny? And didn't Stan bother telling him why he made the offer to pay him in the first place? He hadn't ALWAYS been paying Kenny. It was just after Ken said he couldn't do it anymore.

So yeah, I feel bad for Kyle harming his body like that every...single...weekend. Seven bottles? Are you INSANE?!?! That would KILL someone if dont quickly enough and frequently enough. Kyle's a closet alcoholic then. At any rate, their little interludes were very cute, very tasteful. I like your analogies, such as "Every time he touched me for this reason or another I would feel warmth enveloping me as if I was snuggling under a blanket on a really cold night." Good imagery there. Aw...boys suck. They need to just come right out and SAY what they're feeling instead of potentially hurting their relationships by using the other or hurting themselves by drinking the entire world. Lol.

Once again, I think this was wonderful. You can say its one of your bad ones, and you can go on thinking that, but I'm going to say otherwise and tell you are full of s-. Hehe. GOOD good story and I'm excited for the two boys and their further open relationship-ness.
Wendy Walker
2006-12-15
ch 1,
abuseFantastic. Simply, utterly, desperately fantastic.
Mizuki Perry
2006-10-16
ch 1,
abuseOld story, new reviewer, fucking, fucking awesome dude!

*gives you a cookie*

Rock on ^_^
Lilchicky004
2006-06-18
ch 1,
abuseWhoa. That was GORGEOUS. It brought out such moving emotions. You're a very talented writer!
Generally Maz
2006-05-10
ch 1,
abuseYou write better than people who only know English =D!
Coffeey
2006-03-21
ch 1,
abuseYou are so awesome, you write the best oneshots. This was so adorable and I loved it.

8)Coffeey
Lil-Diego
2006-03-20
ch 1,
abuseAW! Very neat and awesome :)
Kawaiii
2006-02-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseaw *fuzzies* that was so sweet an ending, one of my fave StanKyle pairings ever. You've given it a really original twist...keep writing (though this one is perfect as it is)! *applauds*
ahhelga
2005-10-09
ch 1,
abuseUgh, I'm crying. Again. This is what happens when you're reading Stan/Kyle stories all weekend.

Well, angsting aside, I must say, out of all the fics, this is one of the best! It really is! And actually, I did not see one misspelling/grammar mistake. That was great. Absolutely great. Man. I did not see that Kyle twist coming. Gosh, you rock. Much love.

thats me
ahhelga
aka Pauline
Michiru Tenou
2005-07-07
ch 1,
abuseI liked this. I can't really place what I liked about it so much, but I did like it. Way to go!
Omusubi
2005-06-21
ch 1,
abuseGod, I read this story a long time ago and forgot to review it! ;_; I loved this. It's probably one of my absolute favorite one-shots. It's brilliantly written.
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