so perfect and beautifully written... i almost cried, even though i was on the subway!!

I love this story and its portrayal of Sango. I actually believe I wrote a story like this a LONG time ago, too bad I deleted it...;_; well, your story was better anyways. ^_^

You took me completely by surprise. Here I thought that it was Inuyasha's future with Kagome we'd have to worry about, but that one line - "They're not here" - made everything snap into place all at once. Terrible, but exhilarating too.

This is one of Sango's happy-sad endings that strikes me as being the most tragic of all. Rather than lamenting her loneliness, she doesn't even let herself accept it. And the way you wrote that out - wow. Just. Wow.

Beautiful and dark. I couldn't have asked for anything more, so thank you. ^^

Wow.

I don't know where to start.

That was so sad and angsty and depressing. I'm actually feeling a little depressed right now myself. But, as sad as that was, it was really... Well, beautiful.

As sad as it is, I definately will comment on how well you wrote this story. I was really teary eyed for a good bit of it.

And now that I think about it, this is something that could really happen in the series. A psychotic break down is almost too scary to think about. Lol.

You did an amazing job with this story.

Ahh...I really don't know what to say.What I really can say is, it's a good job done.My eyes were glue to it the whole time.

This was so terrifyingly beautiful. That is why you are my idol. :) The disconnected way in which you wrote it really completed this fic, and the mood of this was perfect. Amazing.

Oh... my.

I don't even know what to DO after this one. It's so sad... and yet, at least she's making herself happy, but it's sa~a~ad. *is making no sense, and could care less*

Beautiful, May. ;_; *goes off to find cheery fluff to cheer me up*

My mouth is agape. Completely open at the shock of what I've just read. THAT, Miss Aprill May, was beautiful. Stingingly so, bitterly so, but beautiful nonetheless. The beginning was so full of hope, that Sango truly had found a future for herself and the ones that she loved so much that she was happy in. I was smiling but, after reading some of your others works a little while ago, I knew that stories like these never have a happy ending. Inu-Yasha's speech took my breath away, and the only think running through my head was, "Oh, God, oh, no..." And those last few lines... they really tugged at my heart. Wow, I might cry. I never cry after reading fanfiction, so you can only imagine.

I absolutely love your writing style. It's haunting and wonderful at the same time. Your vocabulary is rich, sometimes excessively so that I need to look something up in the dictionary, but it gives even more depth to the fic. There were a few grammatical errors, mostly commas and the like that no one pays attention to but that cause me, a natural grammar freak, to wince, but they were minor enough that they didn't destroy my enjoyment of the fic.

This was probably one of the better one-shots I've read in a while. So angsty, but so brilliant. I must add this to my favorites list; its unforgettable and a must-read for any darkfic lover. Excellent work; I hope to see more stories like this from you in the future.

You write Sango's delusions so well...It was so sad.

Sango's detachment from reality and self delusions are a strange thing of beauty, no matter how sad it is that she has been reduced to such a state of denial. I am always in awe when I read your pieces. Wish I'd read this sooner ^ ^

dude thats sad update soon--shadow

...holy hell... that was depressing. but really good. but now i'm depressed. but it's okay. i'll EVENTUALLY get over it. wow. just... wow.

it is charming.. beautiful, sad, and you have a lot of talent to write. I love this story and i hope to read something else from you soon..
greetings

huh? Who's dead and who isn't? What? It was well-written, sure as hell dark, but what?

Whoa. Creepy. Like it.