Omg I loved this. Haha. So original, lovely job )

Genius, pure freakin' genius! I like pie! Meeps!

lol!

LOL! HAHAHAHA! So funny! Nice oneshot!

LMAO! Ok, that was great. That was halirous.

Lol, this was really good for an IC humor. There aren't a lot of those around, and I appreciate all the IC fics I can get. I had to reread the part about Jiraiya not being allowed to use a henge... and then I was like, O.o;

Short and succint.

LOL. Very clever, Jiraiya. XD;

Not what i was expecting but it was still very good! X3 lol I loved it! And it's going to be on my favorites list! D Hope to read more! Buh-bye!

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wait, WHAT?

correct me if i'm wrong, but jiraiya was... the... bra...?

um... interesting idea. oddly in character.

makes sense, y'know.

i like it. woman to woman talk.

Bwahahahaha! I can so see Jiraiya doing something like that. At any age. The thing is, I'm not sure he'd have to suggest an idea like that to Naruto. It's more a question of how corrupted he can get Naruto over the years away from Konoha. Or how much of his own perverseness Naruto's willin to admit to when he gets back. Thanks for the laugh

OMG Hahahaha THat was OMG hahahaha Great hahaha

Nice one-shot. I especially like the perverted use of henge no jutsu. As for your writing, the way you limit detail to only the important stuff is okay for a short piece like this, where you aren't aiming for a lot of imagery. If this had been a STORY, however, I'd have criticized your lack of detail.

But good job!

Makes me wonder about Naruto's proclamation of having learned all-new perverted jutsu ;)

Heehee.

OMG Jiraiya is so perverted! Lol!