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| pmochizuki 2007-01-05 ch 1,  | abuseWow, this was a truly beautifully written vignette. The whole theme was about 'passion,' yet you handled the end with such beauty with the lines: "he picked up her hand and kissed the back gently, softly, almost reverently." THAT, such a simple gesture, was better than passion... am I making sense? AH, perhaps I'm not making sense but I just love how you've captured Mac's 'special passion.' ^_^ Thanks for a great fic! |
| Mishelle20 2006-12-10 ch 1, | abuseGreat job with this, I especially loved the ending. |
| mj0621 2006-09-16 ch 1, | abusenice one! :D -mj(wgf) |
| mizukimarr910 2005-11-18 ch 1, | abuseAH you should soo write a sequel this rocked. please consider it and please keep writing and update again soon. thanx mizukimarr910 |
| raingarcia022 2005-04-25 ch 1, | abuseWhat a beautiful piece to read. I love the ending- particularly, how it capped off the whole conversation. This didn't seem like a "draft", as you have said. Its a great read. Great job. |
| em 2005-04-22 ch 1, anon. | abusei always look forward to your end-of-episode fics. another cute one...i enjoy a little fluff every now and! |
| The Madhatter2 2005-04-19 ch 1, | abuseAww. That was cute. I love how you show Mac and Stella's companionship... how easily they flow and work together. I also liked how you didn't have Stella know everything about Mac and his relationship with Claire. Yet Stella knew most of what he thought and lifted him out of his doubts. The way you portrayed Mac as selfless is true too. That was a nice touch. I really enjoyed this fic. :D Great job!! |