Poor Shadow and Cayote! He has a wife and kids! Stop rouge!

You've not updated in a long time.This is pretty good to.There's not many vampire stories that are this you update when you get the chance?

Hello, I am the author formerly known as DarkXeno. I like this chapter, but theoretically, wouldn't Shadow have become a vampire if Rouge bit him? Anyway, I still say it's only a matter of time before she goes after Knuckles.

Nice work, update please!

Wow, this is really good. I hope you update soon. I can't wait to see how Sonic and Tails react. Is there some feelings beside friendship between Shadow and Rouge?

Danm, This is, Shesh, UPDATE IT! Oh there is a way! Hmm, D always said, killing the one that did the biteing would sure the infection, but, he's already dead an't he? Ug, talk about screwed. UPDATE!

Hey, you really need to update! This is so good! Please?

This story is so cool and suspencefull! I hope there is a way for Shadow to save her...Wait! I heard killing the original vampire will cure any of his/her victims from damnation!

Omg! Absoloutly brill! Update! Update! Update! Is there going to be any romance in this? I hope so.

Overall, the 2 chapters potrayed the flashbacks believably and explains pretty much, making up a prelude to chapter 1. It is a very good potrayal of the vampire, wanting blood, the taste of it etched into her mind like ecstasy..., very good idea.

Something weird is that Rouge doesn't seem to be a total vampire yet... even though you said that her eyes turned black, there is still some trace of her old attitude. You might need to correct this, but all in all, good chap.

That was neat!! You tottally had me almost gasp when Shadow didn't get the blood from the bank and he put out his arm and I was like "Is he actually gonna do THAT?!" That was awesome! MASTER OF SUSPENCE! Oh sorry for getting a little uptight about that one word, it just came outta no where and yeah... haha don't worry about me or anything. Anyways... Awesome job! Also made me sad when the poor girl died! MUHAHAHAHA! ... er.. bad place to but my laugh. I mean it WAS sad. Not funny... YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN! KEEP IT UP!! SEE YA!

Very nice long chapter. Please continue.

Hm... thsi would have to bethe first horror fic I've ever read. Anyway, it's going great so far. It is pretty freaky, but that's what it's supposed to be.

So basicly, Rouge is now some kind of She-Creature or something? And given how she was ranting about the color red in the first chapter, I would have expected her to go after Knuckles by now.

Why don't they make MOVIES this good?!