 Mask of Lies 2009-09-13 . chapter 1how old is he? |
 ProbablyNoOneYouKnow 2007-01-06 . chapter 1E... That's slightly messed up. |
 Kei Ikari 2006-05-26 . chapter 1UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! SEQUEL! ANOTHER CHAPTER! SOMETHING! JUST WRITE MORE OF THIS FIC!! |
 anneth10 2006-03-31 . chapter 1wow.. nice oneshot.. very catchy and I love your point :P good luck in writing.. :D |
 Kitroku 2006-02-24 . chapter 1I love reading your one-shots, wish you would continue this one though. |
 SilentVigil 2006-01-11 . chapter 1hmm... i like it. |
 angelkitty77 2005-12-13 . chapter 1this is so cool do you have more planned or is this just to tease and tantalize us with what we cant have. love it |
 willibob3000 2005-12-13 . chapter 1Well that was...odd. Odd but strangely good. Not really sure what else to say. I'd like to know what happens after this one shot ended, I'm intrigued now lol. Definitely my sort of fic. I love the way you described Harry towards the end of it, it really made him seem less than human whereas most fics he grows wings in make him seem more than human. Definitely different. |
 Sarah R Potter 2005-09-22 . chapter 1Awesome story. Very interestig. I just love it. Please update soon so we can find out what happens next. |
 Sarah 2005-09-05 . chapter 1 *sighs* You have wonderful ideas for one shots.. Aww. It's kinda sad. and well written. |
 NamelessHeretic 2005-07-30 . chapter 1w00t. |
 random palindrome 2005-07-08 . chapter 1 no flame. praise |
 koolie bia 2005-06-27 . chapter 1 pleeze rite more chp.s
i wood like for harry to go evil
update |
 Lady Game 2005-06-04 . chapter 1Hey, I'm over here from the FA fic exchange...
Well, that was... strange. Interesting, but strange. The Dursleys really were evil, and I like the whole 'I am what you made me' slant. I felt sorry for little!Harry in the flashback, poor boy. It was an interesting idea, which is always good.
It was very short, and thats ok, but if you didn't want to end on a full stop a '...' might have been better than a comma (or was that just a typo?) Also, you don't necessarily have to write flashback/end flashback, the italics do that for you and it can annoy some people a bit. Also, watch your apostrophes - it's is only used for it is, nothing else.
Other than that, good work! It was a great idea and you wrote it well, the details of Demon!Harry were nice, the darkness making him glow (nice little oxymoron) etc etc.
~*Lady*~ |
 Moi 2005-05-20 . chapter 1 This is great. Really. Couldn't you write a sequel, maybe? I'd definitely read it. |