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Mask of Lies
2009-09-13 . chapter 1
how old is he?
ProbablyNoOneYouKnow
2007-01-06 . chapter 1
E... That's slightly messed up.
Kei Ikari
2006-05-26 . chapter 1
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! SEQUEL! ANOTHER CHAPTER! SOMETHING! JUST WRITE MORE OF THIS FIC!!
anneth10
2006-03-31 . chapter 1
wow.. nice oneshot.. very catchy and I love your point :P good luck in writing.. :D
Kitroku
2006-02-24 . chapter 1
I love reading your one-shots, wish you would continue this one though.
SilentVigil
2006-01-11 . chapter 1
hmm... i like it.
angelkitty77
2005-12-13 . chapter 1
this is so cool do you have more planned or is this just to tease and tantalize us with what we cant have. love it
willibob3000
2005-12-13 . chapter 1
Well that was...odd. Odd but strangely good. Not really sure what else to say. I'd like to know what happens after this one shot ended, I'm intrigued now lol. Definitely my sort of fic. I love the way you described Harry towards the end of it, it really made him seem less than human whereas most fics he grows wings in make him seem more than human. Definitely different.
Sarah R Potter
2005-09-22 . chapter 1
Awesome story. Very interestig. I just love it. Please update soon so we can find out what happens next.
Sarah
2005-09-05 . chapter 1
*sighs* You have wonderful ideas for one shots.. Aww. It's kinda sad. and well written.
NamelessHeretic
2005-07-30 . chapter 1
w00t.
random palindrome
2005-07-08 . chapter 1
no flame. praise
koolie bia
2005-06-27 . chapter 1
pleeze rite more chp.s
i wood like for harry to go evil
update
Lady Game
2005-06-04 . chapter 1
Hey, I'm over here from the FA fic exchange...
Well, that was... strange. Interesting, but strange. The Dursleys really were evil, and I like the whole 'I am what you made me' slant. I felt sorry for little!Harry in the flashback, poor boy. It was an interesting idea, which is always good.
It was very short, and thats ok, but if you didn't want to end on a full stop a '...' might have been better than a comma (or was that just a typo?) Also, you don't necessarily have to write flashback/end flashback, the italics do that for you and it can annoy some people a bit. Also, watch your apostrophes - it's is only used for it is, nothing else.
Other than that, good work! It was a great idea and you wrote it well, the details of Demon!Harry were nice, the darkness making him glow (nice little oxymoron) etc etc.
~*Lady*~
Moi
2005-05-20 . chapter 1
This is great. Really. Couldn't you write a sequel, maybe? I'd definitely read it.
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