So sad yet sweet. I've been meaning to write a Duncan x Hiih fic but I've got to re-read the books since I've forgotten most of what happened.

Duncan is DEFINITELY in denial.

I really liked this. I've don't know Hiih, but I love Duncan, and I really like this characterisation of him, especially the way you've shown his loyalty to the Atreides. I also love the end - it's so sweet. :)