   Ranmaleopard 10/16/11 . chapter 1well i guess now ranma will join the tribe... |
| Digital Dragon Productions 7/10/10 . chapter 1 Ha - Nicely done. Could have used a bit of set up of why Akane is angry at that point to keep her in character. Maybe something of Ranma having to save her again from Happi and him telling her she can't compete with the pervert. When's she's angry she stops thinking straight.
Perhaps take out the part of canceling the wish as some Genie stories count that as a wish (after all the last time she could still cancel the wish he he let her so that)and that would make it more sticking. But over all a good one shot. |
| Ganheim 5/1/09 . chapter 1 "CANCEL THE WISH!"
[Wouldn’t this, too, act as a wish? Oh well, small nit-pick]
The moral of this story:
"You always get what you deserve."
[I dunno if Akane deserves to turn into Cologne (just imagine all the paperwork the matriarch avoids by staying in Nerima away from the amazon village), but the story is nonetheless amusing]
Relatively short and sweet, not perfect but still amusing. |
| KPheonix 10/17/06 . chapter 1 !
10 times. Dude, it should've been Happosai, but Cologne? Real funny. |
| dogbertcarroll 10/11/06 . chapter 1 Evil! I like it! |
| Talantus 7/4/06 . chapter 1 ... ... ... ... i guess there's only one thing to do after this...
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mann that was nasty of you! hahaha very funny! :) |
| bigdaddycool 5/13/03 . chapter 1 hahahahhaha!
man that was real fucking funny! hahaha
writre more tories like that |
| Sunhawk1 3/4/02 . chapter 1 (smirks)
Hmm... I seem to smirk a lot on your stories... |
| Ranma.5 fan 2/7/02 . chapter 1 You're wrong about this being in character. Akane isn't like that at all. This would be someting the other fiancees would have done, not her. |
| KrNxNiGgA 9/18/01 . chapter 1 hahahaha...good ...i always hated akane...*bweeeeeeee* *rasberries those god awfull misled knights of the true fanace* i mean dang..i thought no one was worse than Kuno...i mean to live in there own fantasy world like that...*sigh* so sad...
ja ne |
| Dane 8/24/01 . chapter 1 Great. Just Great! A perfect fate for Akane! |
| Rowanthehairscyther 5/30/01 . chapter 1 *glares-hard* It had to be Al... hoo boy. |
| RisuNga 5/10/01 . chapter 1 *snicker* very funny |
| Joe T 5/10/01 . chapter 1 BWAAAHHH-HA-HA-HA!
Still, you realize that Cologne isn't 1000 times as good a martial artist as Ranma. 987 times, yes, but 1000 times? No Way!
There's only ONE person in the Ranmaverse 1000 times as good as Ranma.
Akane should've turned into... Happosai!
HOTCHA! |
| Puck Silverbreeze 4/23/01 . chapter 1 Hehehehe Don't agree Cologne is that far beyond Ranma but HAHAAHAHAHAAHAHA |
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