I feel so bad for Rin, and even though I'm a Sesshomaru/Rin shipper (I also like the good ol' SessXKags) I really liked this story. Though, it must REALLY suck to die so young for EVERY SINGLE LIFETIME because the first (or twentieth, you decide) soul had been with a demon.

Sigh, poor Rin.

-Twinklefeather

PS: Maybe next time you should try a happier fanfic...?

This is truly awesome... when I read this, I shuddered with emotions. ...But next time, maybe you could write a happy long Rin Sess fic? Please? O.o

wow. amazing. wow

thank you!

LOL! This is so morbid, but good! At first, I couldn't believe what he did, I told myself to "keep reading" and then it happens again, she's gone and he waits... *shiver of fear and excitement* Even though it's an endless cycle, it was good to read. It has a lot of potential and poor Sess and Rin because by the end of it, I got this feeling that Sess is getting worse and Rin is retaining more and more of her previous memories. Couldn't think of anything but... "wow".

I liked it. The plot is interesting and quite dark. And Sess is in character - which I love. It takes up the dilemma regarding Rins reincarnations and Sesshy's reactions towards them. And I can't help but feel sorry for her. He'll never let her go - and she'll never escape.

God, I'm thoroughly disturbed.

But goddamn, this was really well written. & indeed...you did capture Sesshoumaru's view on the world quite perfectly.

*shudder.

Keep on writing. ;P

Wow, seriously creepy. Good, but. . .creepy. This could have been written as something much longer and more drawn out, but your sparseness really works and ramps up the, well, the creepiness!

amazing!

Oh my gosh... that really was horrifying. If he gave her some time during each lifetime she would have "gotten it right." What little kid isn't going to cry when they get kidnapped? For shame, Sesshomaru! Wonderfully written as usual, though!

This story is incredible.

The way you include how her tears taste adds some sort of intensity.

But, wow, Sesshomaru is really twisted here! I didn't realize it until the end but he kills her everytime!

That was when I finally realized why it's rated 'Horror'. 0.0

This was a great read!

I agree with Melanie's Heart's review below. Perfectly captured.

huh?

Sad confused yes...

damn. I mean damn. Nice but so dark. well done. well done

I am terrified. *favorited*

Through Sesshoumaru's eyes, the world can be seen in only black and white. You've captured him perfectly in this!