|Reviews for Ashen and Sober Skies|
| Eru no Tsubasa 2/18/13 . chapter 17
Poor Snape! :(
| MuggleCreator 1/8/13 . chapter 25
Ooh. Wow. Love this exploration of dreamscape, etc.
Please continue! I want to see how it ends...
| Jeeun 12/12/12 . chapter 11
Oh this was nice. Really nice. The tibits of Severus and Minerva's past interactions. It was amusing what has happened at that time, and at the same time so sad that Severus can't remember any of that. Wonder if that little girl is Minerva's youngerself. Maybe a bit of a crush on Severus's part? A memory of a picture of Minerva he has seen?
| Jeeun 12/12/12 . chapter 9
Am I seeing a bit of an omage to Dante? It was good to know what Severus has in his mind, and Dumbledore's first trip into the mind was to act as an observer at least, so I think it was a bit of a success in a way, for Dumbledore to really grasp what Severus has gone through, and what he had to endure.
| Jeeun 12/12/12 . chapter 8
Yup, Dumbledore isn't that caring. Severus is just another one of his reponsiblity and nothing more. Sure he weeps and feel sad, but that's what anyone would feel if they encounter something like this. Severus isn't that special in Dumbledore's heart. Severus thinks of him as his mentor, a person he really feels strong affection, but Dumbledore doesn't. Maybe I'm trying to find some more, too much more and getting disappointed by not getting enough. My fault. And the girl with red hair and blue eyes, that isn't Lily, right? Since Lily had green eyes? Wonder who she is.
| Jeeun 12/12/12 . chapter 7
Is it just me? Dumbledore really doesn't seem to care for Severus that much. Yes, he cries, yes he is overjoyed that Severus seems to come back, and yes he thinks 'poor Severus' but that's about it. I don't quite feel that Dumbledore is quite compassionate in this story. Nor does Pomphrey for that matter. She's only acting in a professional way, and not at all acting as if she's caring for a colleague that she cares for. Well, she has to distinct herself with her patients to fully use her skills, but quite too distinct. Minerva seems like the only one who really truly cares for Severus. Maybe that was your main goal. I'll have to read further to really know, but well, I guess I'll have to read more to find out.
| AvadaK3 11/4/12 . chapter 25
Update... please? How are the four chapters going?
| Guest 9/22/12 . chapter 25
I really hope you will soon go on with this story. Your style of writing is absolutly gorgeous!
| Guest 8/5/12 . chapter 25
please do finish it or i will die in pain !
i am ... i cant even cry !
please bring happiness back to them ! they need peace after all dont you think so
| riverrat 6/24/12 . chapter 25
That is a very interesting story. I also like your style of writing. You have a gift to get your readers imagination going, so we can picture Severus' mindscape perfectly
I hope you continue. It would be a shame if this great story wouldn't be finished.
| Silverthreads 12/1/11 . chapter 25
Ah, good to see this. I'm still caught up by it and in it.
| Edwina B. Karch 11/30/11 . chapter 25
Wonderful story. It has been an interesting journey and I hope updates are soon.
| Kniga-Sitara 11/30/11 . chapter 25
It is interest story... thanks for sharing yours idea! Wait for more :D
| Saramagician 11/24/11 . chapter 25
It is really interesting! please update soon...
| odogoddess 11/11/11 . chapter 25
"No, but I need them." Bravo, Severus! Nicely done. :)