Interesting start. Looking forward to more. Thanks for the read.

I don't know what is keeping you from this one. It look to be fascinating right now. I hope at some point you are able to write more on this story.

Wow! This is really interesting! I'm quite curious about how the character will develop. Another excellent start to a wonderful ficcie! Please update ASAP!

Raen

Such a masterfully woven story, and you really make my heart ache for Kenshin, who "had a longer childhood this time". I mean, really! What are you trying to do to us? ! ?

Wow, I really love how you've both changed and preserved these characters. And the story itself-well, already it seems worthy of not even being a fanfic!

Hi...again. Heh...I forgot to say about Chapter 3...The way that Kaoru and Kenshin (or the Battousai?) first met was very well-written! It was a wonderful meeting, and it's great that she stood up to everyone else like that. It truly shows her strength, her kindness, and her desire to protect.

Once again, thanks!

Until next time!

Good luck.

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For some reason, I have never seen this story before, though it was published almost a year ago. But, no matter, I read it...and the chapters seem to be getting longer and longer. Yay! _ That is wonderful.

Though you said you hadn't updated this story for quite a while, I really do hope that you will soon, when you have more time, please. I wonder what Ikiro's role is...we get some idea, but not too much. And Kenshin and Kaoru? We get the main idea. They're both so sweet as children. Will Kenshin get a cross-shaped scar, too? And how old is Ikiro? Will Tomoe be in this story?

Thanks for continuing this story! I hope that you'll update soon.

Good luck!

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This is coming along nicely. I truly am in love with your fantasy fics. They are wonderful.

Happy Holidays, sulou

I think your story is great, that I do. () Your control of vocabulary and grammar is spectacular and, even better, your story is actually INTERESTING. Some people have wonderful ideas for stories but they ruin the whole thing by using abbreviations and tacky language. While, some manage to come up with actually LEGIBLE stories but their plots go off the point or are some old wives' tale that we have heard over and OVER again... Please continue with this story- I'm really looking forward to it!

I love your stories...so imaginative and interesting!

Oh! Exciting chapter! I really liked the dream. Yes, I'm evil I know...

I'm glad you haven't forgotten this story! For so far I've really enjoyed it and I can't wait to read more!

Fabulous chapter title! Dark and ominous, and succinctly characterizing each player. I'll be reading this story, as well, it looks like!

Yay, you updated this story! I liked it tonz, please update again soon!

ja ne!

OH I WONDER WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN NOW? WELL LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT ONE!

Oh... this is certainly an intriguing premise, and well written, too. Looking forward to more, whenever that may be... _