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DrewMayShipper
2009-07-13 . chapter 8
There was so much to love about this story and I loved it all. As much as I want to rant on about it all, I will save you the trouble and condense it as much as I can xD What I loved the most was the characterization of each person. They were represented to realistically and so well! Funnily enough, I think my favorite characters were Mokuba and Yugi...but I find them terribly endearing, so I'm partial to them xD I did love the characterizations very much though. I also liked the whole idea of the constellation tying into Seto for Yami. I also liked the banter on homosexuality between Seto, Yami, Duke, Mai, Bakura and Malik. It was refreshing xD It was a lovely story (:
karina305
2008-05-01 . chapter 8
The ending may seem pointless and make a joke out of the delicately woven declaration made by Yami. But! I feel it's more realistic than most stories are. And more true to the existing backdrop of humour. Something more cliché would have ruined this sweet little romp.

Memorable Moment: Seto cooking. Personally, if someone was cooking me breakfast in black tights I'd wonder if they planned to kill me with the bacon and eggs.
SeReNiTy9293
2007-12-27 . chapter 3
I found the kiss unexpected... Kisses on fanfics usually happen later in the relationship... I liked it though... ^_^
shadows
2007-12-22 . chapter 8
Aww. I didn't expect to like this story but I really did. I usually like more angst and drama, but I think all the humor sold me on it pretty quick. That was a very fun read, and I'm happy I found it! Oh man, I was so sure Kaiba was going to rip one of his Blue Eyes cards though and that made me sad, especially because I had been sure that it would turn out to be a misunderstanding like that. I'm glad he couldn't go through with it! Haha, the end of chapter 7 was especially great.
DamagedWorth
2007-10-24 . chapter 8
Absolutely brilliant. I loved it, I hope to see more from you. You really capture Seto and Yami as a couple well!
Abi2
2007-04-15 . chapter 8
Kawaii, very wonderfully cute ^_^
KnotofRibbon
2006-06-28 . chapter 8
Woohoo! Another wonderful story. I really enjoyed this. You're so amazing. Keep up the great work!
FanFiction.net fan
2006-06-24 . chapter 8
Good one Kaiba!
FanFiction.net fan
2006-06-24 . chapter 7
That's not the right card! There is not way Sugoroku would have left that valuble card outside its case!

Lol!

Good one Yugi! Wonder what would happen if they left Yami for a week?

This is good! What's Seto gonna do?
FanFiction.net fan
2006-06-24 . chapter 6
Lol! Everyone arguing bout heaps of different stuff! Loved it!

Oh, how nice of Seto...
FanFiction.net fan
2006-06-24 . chapter 5
Oh...*smiles softly*

*giggles out so loud my mum must have heard me* Sprung!

Um, guys, isn't Mokuba still in the kitchen?

What Seto said sounds like it also applies to the way hye went about the relationship with Yami.

Hey Mokuba, Seto and Yami have to go for who knows how long okay? Thought I may as well tell you since they just walked out the door without doing so.
FanFiction.net fan
2006-06-24 . chapter 4
Watch what you Say Seto. Lol

Now Seto's doing what Yami did; talking randomly.

Seto, you have one smart bro!

Seto!

Poor Yami.

*smiles widely*
FanFiction.net fan
2006-06-24 . chapter 3
O! This is one good sign the stars have sent!

Did Sugoroku take the card with him for safe keeping and forget to tell Yami?

I thought Yami had fallen asleep util I read about him tugging at his shirt and tracing patterns.

O!
FanFiction.net fan
2006-06-24 . chapter 2
Lol! They say that you always find what you're looking for when you're not, and that is the case here.

Sugoroku's gonna go off!
FanFiction.net fan
2006-06-24 . chapter 1
You're like me Pysche. I complete my stories before posting them.

O! How cute!

Poor Yami. He'll probably sleep in tomorrow if he forgets to set his alarm clock.

Lol. Seto's gonna see Yami!

Is Yami going to be asleep when Seto comes in, and then Seto would notice him asleep and Mokuba would notice his brother's expression?
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