 Luz Nocturnal 3/6/04 . chapter 1AND you write OLS fic. :begins construction of mini-shrine to Quatrina: _
Soulful, sad, determined. Both Suzuka and this piece share the same qualities. Her narration of such troubling events, detached but seemingly on the edge of emotion, was eloquently handled. |
 Okieguy 1/6/02 . chapter 1well, this isn't your best work I'd give it a 4 it doesn't really capture my attention |
 GataFairy 6/20/01 . chapter 1Oooooo. Me liiiiiiiiiike. Suzuka cooooooool. . |
 IX CarpeDiem XI 4/13/01 . chapter 1I LUVED your fic! I don't care for most Outlaw Star fics (though I like Outlaw Star), but for this one I think I'll make an exception. The detail and expressions were very clear for me. You're very good at the pre-show thing. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to hear the next one. |
 Aeris 4/2/01 . chapter 1 I don't know what else I can say other than that this is a nice story. It's sad, but know we know how Suzuka felt. |
 Ally-chan 3/31/01 . chapter 1 Yeah! A Suzuka fic! I can't get enough of them and there's so few ;(! Anyways, I loved it! |
 Evad-Sentai 3/31/01 . chapter 1good story it was very good. Suzuka is my favorite ols character |
 Haruka Tenou 3/30/01 . chapter 1 "Bokken" my friend! It is not a katana! It is a bokken! A katana is made of steel. A bokken i made of wood. |
 Aislinn 3/26/01 . chapter 1very good! |
 Shiari 3/25/01 . chapter 1 As I've been telling you, its as good as ever. hmmmm... maybe there aren't many Suzu fans out there? beh. Their loss. Anyways... I loved it! I always love your fics! You RULE! ::grovels:: |
 ArmAndLeg 3/25/01 . chapter 1Arm: You never seize to amaze me, you know that? Leg: Ohhhhh noooo, here she goes again... Arm: Quiet you! Leg: Iie, I refuse to be quiet, it's early in the morning and you made me get up, I have every right to speak. Arm: I think you know that we liked it, as usual, and it is about time you gave poor Jim and Gene a break... Though not too long of one. |
 Nanashi No More 3/22/01 . chapter 1*bursts into tears* So sad...poor Suzuka...you're _really_ good at the pre-OLS stuff..._ |