Very nice story, I think the plot is really interesting and original. Poor Elrohir, I hate rats!!:D Are you still writing this story? I hope so, I´m so interested to see what happens next! I read Lost as well and loved it.

Wow, so great to see that you’ve updated! I’ve been a fan of your writing ever since the first chapter of Lost, and your mature portrayal of the twins was one of the few out there that served as an inspiration for me when I started writing.

Believe me, I know how it can feel to struggle with getting a chapter “just right” and how long it can take, but I’m so glad that you kept at it. It was certainly worth the wait! So, just know that if it takes months or even years for the next chapter to come (but I hope it won’t!) you’ll still have your faithful fans eagerly awaiting more of this tale.

Wow! You're back! I had really quite despaired of you ever updating. (There, that should be enough of a guilt trip ;)
I am so happy to see this excellent story updated and am eagerly anticipating the outcome of the twins predicament. Really great chapter, thank you for sharing.

I almost fell off my chair when I saw who the chapter alert was from. I sat in shock for several seconds. Well I am glad to see that you are still alive and writing. Look forward to reading the next chapter. Take care.

I'm looking forward to next chapter. This one was great even at the late night hour, I've read it. Please continue soon.

Very few authors are worth waiting for...but you always are. As ever, your work is a pleasure to read: creative, well paced, good characterization, and deeply thoughtful. Thank you for raising the bar in fanfiction, and welcome back.

You're BACK! HOORAY!
Oh my... both twins are being a bit unreasonable, aren't they... And Benny! Oh my goodness he is a brat! Yeah, they killed his dog, but that is absolutely no reason for him to go and lie, and the stupid villagers who decide to lock Elrohir up for no reason! GAH!... Okay, done ranting, sorry. Still an excellent story, and I can't wait to see what happens next and to see the villagers get their comeuppance... *growls at Benny and the wiry man* And I really want to smack Estel upside the head right now... being 16 is no excuse...
Update soon!

Ah brilliant!

I was so excited to get a mail that this story had been updated; I went to read it imediately and wow, what a chapter. It's an amazing story you are rolling out and even after so long time I can still remember all the details of what happened before in the story. That is a rare thing. Only truly magnificent stories are able to pull that off. Your story truly pulls me in and burns itself into my mind.

I love how you are able to make it flow so brilliantly and I could feel Elladan's anguish just rolling off the pages, as well as Elrohir's annoyance with him. Your portrayal of Estel is also very good. I am happy that you manage to stay with him being the annoying brat. Oftentimes in stories bad characteristics get watered out as the story progresses because the author likes the character. I am happy to see you keep it that way still.

And my, what a cliff hanger you left us with once again. Please do tell what will happen later.

I am still completely in love with your writing and I have read your other story countless times by now (have it printed out) and this one is definately a favourite too.
I love it.

OMG, I was just off to bed when I got an email saying this story had been updated, yay! Of course that means that I had to re-read the whole thing again...and now it's an hour later lol. I'm so pleased you're still updating as this story is definately one of my favourites!

It's real pity you haven't updated for so long. Your writing cause me to shiver. Great plot and description of charakters. I feel like reading, but there is nothing presented. It would be great if you finish this story, because you are really talented.

i really like this, and elladan being a complete twit does really sum up my view on him...um, i won't say it would take forever!! but i do really njoy this story, and if i was elladan or legolas i would of hit him by now!! he is so irrating!!
well done!!

It's me as usual bothering you about posting. :) I loved this chapter and the beginning of this new flashback story. You're such a wonderful writer. I love when Elladan realizes how much he hurt Elrohir with his comments. It's wonderful with him looking back on it too and being all embarrassed.

I have no idea what happened to storiesofarda but it seems to have vanished. In anycase, I was wondering if you could post part 2 of this chapter as I'm seriously dying to read it!

I'll wait patiently- I usually do. I just couldn't wait until my usual early October date for harassing you since I was hoping that you already had part 2 written and could just post it.

Thanks for all your writing.

PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE write more! And more and more and more and more and more! I hate suspense and you're killing me.
'A story is water. If one is deprived of it too long, he/she will become dehydrated and die.' So...what's going to happen next. Do Elrohir and Estel make up? Does anything bad happen to Elrohir in the present?

Mellon nin! It has been so long! Welcome back! Wow I was really, really excited to read this chapter. Thank you so much for updating! Ah, poor Elrohir, you really beat him up physically and emotionally in this story. Excellent. LOL. I hope that you are able to update soon, I want to know what came upon the twins next. And I hope Estel will stop being such an idiot. LOL.

After so long I didn't really expect you to update, but thankyou, thankyou, thankyou, thanyou.