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| mendenbar 2008-01-20 ch 10, | abuseI like authors notes for the most part. On another note. Is it just me, or did anyone else notice that most of Cole's problems were exacerbated by Phoebe? Every time he tried to give up his powers, she talked him out of it. Then she turned on him on his birthday and it was only Paige that looked out of the elevator and wished him a Happy Birthday, wherever he was, while Phoebe looked like she couldn't put him behind her fast enough. After that, I lost interest in the series as I felt that Phoebe had acted much too selfishly. Of course on the 150th episode, they sort of brought him back so he could make things work out for her, lovewise. Greater love hath no demon/man. Still, I liked how you worked it out here. |
| Christine Ruud 2007-06-13 ch 10, | abuseNow THAT is what should have happened is what I say! I loved it...very in-character for everyone. |
| Megan 2006-07-29 ch 10, anon. | abuseThis was a very god fic. I thought the begining was a little lengthy, but other wise I would encourge and ask you to write another fic. Possibly a sequell to this one. Maybe how life is going for the newly reunited couple. Possibly a child? Great fic, KEEP WRITING! |
| Wicked R 2006-06-16 ch 10, | abuseI see it's not just me who needs to cry. good. |
| Wicked R 2006-06-16 ch 9, | abusethey are at times pretty unpredictable the Halliwells aren't they:) |
| Wicked R 2006-06-16 ch 5, | abusea reasonable Phoebe? what are the odds? ok, I'm sarcastic cause I hate her/who doesn't here? |
| ShadowWren 2006-05-31 ch 10, | abuseWhat a inspiring and powerful story! Pheobe/Cole for life! |
| tamsfanalways123 2006-01-24 ch 10, | abuseJust finished reaing the story and I loved it. I wish that would happen on the show, then Phoebe and Cole would be back together and have a baby girl. Loved the writing, it kept me very interested in what was going to happen next. I especially loved the chapter with the discussion between Leo and Paige. That was a very powerful and beautiful chapter. I really hope that you do write a sequel because I would love to read more from this story. Phoebe and Cole fan forever |
| Ancient Galaxy 2005-09-11 ch 10, | abuseThis is a great story ! Well done, although now I demand a sequel ;-) !! |
| Barb6 2005-07-25 ch 10, | abuseAbsolutely excellent chapter - I love it! And I love this story. I am so happy with it - and with the ending. I love stories where Phoebe and Cole are together and happy and this is one of the best I have read in a long time. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story with us. I can't wait to read the sequel! |
| charmed1s-halliwells 2005-07-16 ch 10, | abuseThis is amazing! Phoebe and Cole are totally soul mates. I loved the way you made the whole story unfold. I'll be waiting for the sequal. Keep Writting! |
| OhThoseEyes 2005-07-15 ch 10, | abuseWonderful! I truly hope you do write a sequel soon! |
| sehar123 2005-07-14 ch 10, | abuseI luved it damn i'm sad itz over nd thnx 4 da happy ending.Plz write another fic! |
| Blue eyes6 2005-07-14 ch 10, | abuseWhat a great ending. I love it. Even paige accepts him back. |
| katbaby 2005-07-14 ch 10, | abuseawesome ending; loved the poem; thanks for the story, the forgiveness between the characters, and especially the picture you drew with your words. Hope to see a sequel sometime soon. I would love to see some humor, fights, and love. Again, thanks! |