Can you please finish this story?

OHMYGOD! YOU TOTALLY HAVE TO UPDATE SOON! I MIGHT DIE IF YOU DON'T HURRY! I can't wait to see how Cole and Bob react to chloe and tom!

This isn't too bad of a story, the only thing is that it needs to be broken up, a lot. When a new person speaks that should be a completely new paragraph. It makes the whole thing a lot easier to read.