About the formatting of the dialogue, I initially wrote it with quote marks around the dialogue, but somehow those were lost after awhile of the story being up on this site. It's something I will need to figure out how to fix.

YOU JUST RUINED A GOOD IDEA!

When I read the prologue - I was hoping to see a real inter-Anime fight: Mashins, Magics, Sailor attacks...
What you wrote - is just stupid... :(
Not to mention it's half impossible to discerne when a dialogue ends or begins and the plain text follows...
BAD... :(

pretty good

First of all, "Sailor Banana" is supposed to be "Sailor Butterscotch," I'll change that when I add Chapter 3. Read on if you were one of the people who read my "Sailor Moon: Fire" story, otherwise you'll probably be confused--

This is the rewrite of that fanfic set. I haven't changed the basic plot, that is, the anime characters attacking the Senshi. It's still set in Crystal Tokyo, and there are some Senshi kids in it. However, these changes have been made:
-Only 4 of the Senshi have kids and the rest are all foreign, like the Zodiacs were in SMF.
-The Senshi are now "Dessert Senshi," although they're still successors to the originals' powers (excluding the Starlights, who are still in the story). I had always wanted to do a fanfic where the Senshi had sweet food names, and I also thought the "Neo Senshi" and the "Zodiacs" idea was too cliched.
-For those who were overwhelmed by having 30 Senshi in the first version, now there's only 16, which is the same number of Senshi there are in the anime version of SailorStars if you count Tuxedo Mask and Chibi Moon.

Probably some other things are changed but those are the major ones.