GAH! What bad luck i'm having! I keep stumbling onto great stories only for them not to be finished! -_-

The only bad thing I can comment on is the lack of continuation. I really liked this story and all of the characters. I hope you finish it one day.

SQE! so happy you updated! I am loveing this story so much. I can't wait to see what happens next. This is just so sweet.

waited such long time for this. please update soon.

i'm not sure if i mention this before but i absolutly love this story, so please update...SON

*gushes like a fan girl* omg! malons parents are acutally... that is AWSOME... bleh, i'm running out of words. keep up the good work :)

the part about nafria and the other girl was priceless~

meh negima always does seem to have some influence. btw i forgot to say how great the "bond" idea was. nice~

malonxzelda, hmm i haven't considered that yet

Hey! This is a pretty good story. I began to look for Z X M stories just to see if they existed and I came across this one. It's pretty good, kinda rushed at times, but thats irrelevant. I just wished they would have confessed in private, it would have been more romantic but thats just me. Awesome story, keep at it!

It occured to me earlier that I'm a terrible, terrible person for never reviewing back, especially how long, thoughtful and generally awesome your comments are.
And I find a LoZ fic of all things! This is the first Zelza femslash piece I've read, and I'm really enjoying it so far. You've made an incredibly obscure pairing seem really natural and flow really well.
I absolutely love how you write Zelda. Far too often in fanfiction (and in-game for that matter) she just sits around or gets kidnapped while Link does all the fighting, so it's a really nice change to see her fighting and helping the people of her kingdom.
And the last scene of the last chapter was -so- cute. I'm looking forward to an update of this~

I'm really liking this story so far. The two are really cute together.

Though I'm wondering if Malon is the child of two Gerudo why does she look Hylian?

hooray, new chapter!! this is why it always pays to go back and re-read awesome stories. apparently i don't have this story on alert or i would have noticed that update 2 and a half months ago... o.O;

I thought the action sequences were just fine. And the bit about the girl who insisted on being kidnapped was great!

yes it was way to long from your lat u date :( but you came back and it till good so it's ok

woho! another great chapter, I really like your story so far.very sweet how the relationship between zelda and malon is developing. i'm only wondering how nabooru got mala pregnant...?
well, anyway i'm looking forward to the next chapter, hopefully it'll be long and coming soon! keep on writing so well!

Nice! The whole thing so far's felt pretty natural- quite a few fics out there try to continue from where OoT ended and make it feel forced and trite.

Keep up the awesomeness.

hmm? if Mala and Nabooru are Malon parents, why did Mala leave her to go with Talon? and i thought you say that Mala and Nabooru werent lovers?? but regardless of that, i love the chapter^^

and the quota? lol, funny and cute that^^ and i hope you don mind if i add some of your fics on this community im a staff of