That was one of the most beautiful stories I ever read. Nothing to criticize about ^^, just love it.

Are you going to write a new story soon? Maybe a Butler/OC romance? XDI'd read it immeadetly :)

Yeah, i'm crazy, but your style is just wonderful *thumbs up*

Hey nice plot! And indeed what Juliet would probably do...But I don't want a sequel, the ending's good enough. Not that your story is bad. It's in my favourites list!

Hello

I have just randomly decided to send you a review because I really love this story. I've never read anything like this before, and I'm a romance nut so of course I LOVE this. This is really good, so can you PLEASE write a sequel? It would make so many people(including me) happy.
This review probably makes me sound like some crazed loony, but meh.

MFB

Omg wow. I loved your story. =)
You should write a sequel..:o &I was in tears when Juliet left Justin..Lol Awsome story!

i loved your story! your such an awesome writer. i command you to write another one. NOW! ...please

this is probably a stupid review cause the story is over and you most likly don't check them anymore, but because i'm a loser and have no life i shall spend my oh so precious time and write this review for you, so i hope you enjoy it.

um...cookie?

i know that there is really no point in writing this because you've already gotten to chapter 23 and the story is probably over by then, but you asked for help so i shall give you some. there are many ways to fight, my favorite is when you use a staff. a staff is a type of a long skinny stick (think of a pool stick.)you fling it around and strike people with it. it rocks because 1 you can create alot of distance between you and your attacker and 2 because it creates alot of confusion. There, you asked for my advice and now you have it.

p.s. another fun thing are sies (think two mini swords that kind of resemble a trident.

*sighs happily* That was wonderful. Absolute, sheer bliss. -^_^-
I really liked it!

Eh, I know you finished since 5/26 (that's what, a little more than 3 weeks?), but can you try typing up a sequel or something? Please?

~W0

pet?baby girl?

omg, why did you have to make butler so mean? he's being so cold to make juliet make choices. but! i do like the drama.

excellent! besides some typos, i love it

Hi! it's me. So, as your other story, "Flame Of The Gods" is done, I've decided to start reading this story, and I like!

brill story. i'll read the rest of it later though...

Well! I can't really offer any critique as this is one of the really good fanfics i have ever read!!

Oh...An evil cliffy!! Nvm, i'm off to read nother chapter!

and what about the more pragmatic husband and wife relationships? would juliet be allowed to sleep with whomever she likes? How comes she doesn't ask THAT?