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| Twilight Vampire Angel 2008-07-09 ch 18,  | abuseLOVE IT |
| xbones4lyfx 2008-04-25 ch 18, | abusealls i can say is brilliant, i thought all the characters were written exactly like they would be for the show cant wait for any updates which i hope are SOON to come!! :D |
| goldacharmed 2007-12-03 ch 18, | abusethat was so very inbelevably out of this world good. that was really a very very very very good story. i loved the story line the way you wrote everything was so good too. your a fantastic wrighter. im off to read part two now bye |
| goldacharmed 2007-12-03 ch 17, | abusethis so far had been great ill say more in the next chapter review. but i have one thing to say. you should have done that the future piper went back to the moment right before chris took the potion that turned him evil in the first place. then he would have never became evil and he would be alive, and then they could have all saved wyatt together while chris goes back to the future he helped make, but thats just what i would do. then there would be three pipers and she can just say that there about to give him the worng potion, then they would give him the right one. then he would be healed |
| maggy 2007-09-04 ch 18, anon. | abuseOMG SUCH A GD STORY!! this rocked *sob* sad ending and ohh evil chris! |
| Marcus1233 2007-05-31 ch 18, | abuseI cliff hanger. Nice touch. Although hanging we can anticipate what would happened next. |
| Marcus1233 2007-05-30 ch 13, | abuseSuch drama...Well, she had coming it her way...She's practically begging for it... |
| Marcus1233 2007-05-30 ch 7, | abuseTeehee...(chuckles gleefully)...Amazing how Piper can change the track of her mind so quickly. And the arguments...Priceless..simply priceless... |
| Marcus1233 2007-05-09 ch 5, | abuseMan! Is it just me or all the Haliwells and spouse included are all determined to self-deprecate themselves. And God! Nosy, much? Love the part where Piper said 'Back Off'! Original...in a sense. |
| HollyPhoenix 2007-01-17 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed this, I usually hate fics that have lots of repeated dialogue from the episodes, but you've managed to blend in the shows dialogue with you original writing, it's a beautiful little story. |
| Sweet LIL loz 2007-01-09 ch 18, | abuseOH MY GOSH...i'm lost for words i cried i did... i have no words to explain what im thinking OH MY GOSH |
| charmedbaby11 2006-11-08 ch 18, | abuseDO A SEQUAL!! |
| Potterwing 2006-10-21 ch 18, | abuseI liked the story Is there a sequal |
| Lexa 26 2006-06-05 ch 18, | abusei really liked you story and can't wait to read the second one (part) some parts were a little confusing like in the chapter with gideon and hes talking to sigmond in the second last chapter i believe but over all great story and keep up the good work ^.^ |
| blueeyesbetter 2006-05-11 ch 18, | abuseI am So ** the way that ended! |