Reviews for In The Waiting Line

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mic mcallister 2008-08-17 ch 1, anon.	abuseI liked it. I wish it were a bit more physicaly discriptive. You know like what his face looked like what hers looked like, references to the weather things like that would pull you in even more. Don't get me wrong though, very good
jambled 2006-07-28 ch 1,	abuseSo here's a bit of weirdness for you; I have that zero 7 song so I put it on to listen to while I read, and as I came across the words from the chorus they played at exactly the same time. It was weird in an awesome way. lol. PS; loved the fic. So cute. So lilly.
Cora Clavia 2006-07-13 ch 2,	abuseThat was AWESOME! Two thumbs up!
Katie 2006-04-15 ch 2, anon.	abuseI LOVED IT! yay for happy lilly!
givemecookies 2005-08-10 ch 1,	abusewhat the...?! I didnt review on to this one yet?... I´m strange sometimes...anyways I LOVED your story, it´s absolutly adorable and heartwarming. thanks for sharing your thoughts! cheers, ella
Miss Late Bloomer 2005-08-03 ch 2,	abuseIt's one of those L/S pieces that is fluffy, but manages to be that in the best possible way. Sure, it was fanciful, but not to the point of where it's impossible. The descriptions were good, bringing me into this situation to which you had created for our viewing pleasure, and your dialogue always sounded like it could indeed belong to our wonderful duo. Each ending paragraph was a good choice to end the chapter, and I think chapter 2 surpassed chapter 1, kind of like Christmas with Thanksgiving. (If you don't celebrate, sorry, but that's the most accurate thing I could come up with off top of my head.) Keep up the good work, and don't be shy about updating your other story!
Viv 2005-08-01 ch 2, anon.	abuseLovely vignette, with great characterisation of both Lily and Scotty. You've got a good handle on both their thoughts - love to read more (a full story perhaps)?
LimeJuiceTub 2005-08-01 ch 2,	abuseWow!! Loved reading that! Sweet and sentimental. I'm sure if someone could've seen me, they'd have said that I looked like lovesick fool reading that! :D Keep up the great work!
Uranaikko 2005-07-30 ch 2,	abuseUy...! I love it.. it's simple and sweet... very sweet ^.^ maybe you could write a chappie.. :D
emma 2005-07-28 ch 2, anon.	abusehey, congrats on collage! love this! its really good, i didnt know you were going to do a scotty pov, but it turned out really well, it's really added to the story, so congrats on that too. keep it up!
steph 2005-07-28 ch 2, anon.	abuserealy realy good please send any mors stories if you have written any
Tati aka Trinity 2005-07-27 ch 2,	abuseAw... how sweet! I loved the way you detailed the beginning of their flirtation. Really, really nice. And I'm not even a L/S shipper.
kawaii-peach14 2005-07-26 ch 2,	abuseYES! You added Scotty's POV! Luvs it! It was just as great as the first chapter! Oh congrats on graduating! hugs
Brandi 2005-07-26 ch 2, anon.	abuseYay!I'm so happy you added a Scotty POV. This chapter was just as good, if not better than the first. Oh, and congragulations of graduating!
kawaii-peach14 2005-05-23 ch 1,	abuseOh how sweet ^_^ I'm still waiting for the makers of Cold Case to make a fantasy episode of mine in which Lily and Scotty let loose a little, open up to eachother, and stop acting like cop partners! LOL This story you wrote would be my fantasy episode! peach_fan14

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