i loved this story it was very well written. the characters of Jareth and Sarah were extremely believable and complex. very romantic, i wish i had my own Jareth! i personally loved sarah's friends, they reminded me of mine. great story, keep on writing!

This is a very well-written and exciting story! Samiko is definitely on a higher level than most of the writers on here. I would expect someday to see her published.Bravo for an excellent tale!

I agree with sarah!

Once again..very nice. I did like this one. You write very well :)

Oh I wish you would right a squeal to this! It was amazing

Very Good!

I Think you captured this perfectly!

good one!

omw!

i loved this story so much. thanks for sharing it with all of us!

Ermm, just a quick question about continuity (and possible child neglect?) When Sarah *blinkied* Jareth and herself to her room, did she just leave poor Toby in the high-chair? Karen won't be too impressed (oh please, like she's ever!) if she finds her son like that while Sarah was *napping*!

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!

Beautiful story and very well paced and written. I could have read many more chapters on Jareth and Sarah's adventures together. A sequel would be wonderful! The pairing you have here is so equal and sweet.. I just loved it. Thanks for sharing this! -Clare

I just absolutely love this story...

(Applause) That was a wonderful ending. Your story really started off slow, but I think you were still trying to figure out where you wanted it to go, but once you found a solid idea you ran with it and scored. It's been awhile since I read a good ending that didn't seemed rushed. So I guess marrying the Queen made him the King again. I wish you knew that yet another person read and enjoyed your story. Perhaps you'll do what I did once. Come back in 6 years to find all the reviews you never knew you had. I bow to you, your story was fantastic and thank you for putting it here for me to read.

All together now... aw. Only one more chapter. Whew it has been an adventure indeed. I wonder what you have chosen to do in your final chapter. So I'm going to go ahead and find out.

Could you imagine an 18 year old Jareth putting a stupid drama teacher in his place with a simple hand jester. Even as a teenager his age and majesty show. That was very nicely done.