I've never heard this song, but I imagine random highly-romantic things like this happening when I'm listening to my I-pod.
Though I agree with the first reviewer on the lyrics "baby" and the "oohs", you can't help that.
Tip: When I rewrite songs that have more modern words like that I'll change them into something like...oh, I dunno... "angel" and "please" or something like that.
But you can write what you want, I LOVE IT!

Oh, this was wonderful. I had never thought of using this song in relation to POTO, but now that I think of it, it really does seem like it is perfect. I loved all the detail you were able to incorporate. I think that is what my problems are. I have a hard time putting accurate detail.

Oh brilliance of brilliance of brilliance! We have a challenge for doing this on the DBCA and you should enter this, you'd win hands down! It was incredible!

I love that song and loved your story, it's going on my favorites.

You're not the only one who's in love with that song. In a way Seal kind of relates to the Phantom because his face is scared, but he was burned so...yeah.

God... every hair is standing on end. Your portrayal is excruciatingly vivid, and I wish I could trade places with Christine...

So romantic, I love it!

Keep writing.

Very nice story. However, I couldn't help laughing when the song began. Maybe it would have been different if I had ever heard it, I would have understood the emotion behind it, but right then, I just couldn't figure Erik calling Christine "Baby" and making ohh noises. It sounded so... alien in his mouth! It just doesn't seem to fit with the character and time of the story. Apart from that, the lyrics are nice, and the serenade was nicely written. I'll try to find the song somewhere! Mary