   lilangelchr30305 3/18/08 . chapter 1wow awsome |
| lollypop 6/20/05 . chapter 1 i thout your story was wonderful but should make it longer next time but it trully waonderful |
| Loxes 6/19/05 . chapter 1 Wow, such an incredible fic! Your writing is amazing, I hope I could reach your standard some day!
Keep on writing! |
| Yo's Subordinate 5/14/05 . chapter 1 WOW!
Now that was breath taking!
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wow! |
| Seras-Victoria-Fanboy 4/28/05 . chapter 1 WOW! Great fic, SakuraSango, and congrats on winning STF's contest, I loved how detailed the fic was, you RARELY see such detail in fics nowadays. BTW this is Will_Vandom from TVTome, the founding father of the IY Guide on TVTome. |
| Kitsune Shika 4/23/05 . chapter 1 Oh wow. Another great ficlet by one and only, my idol, and one of the greatest writers on , I give you, sakurasango! XD
You: *MAJOR sweatdrop*
XD Heh... Anywho... very touching! Hope you.. win the contest I guess? xD Hm... in the end... Uni was a LITTLE TINY BIT... weird... But looking at my story the character concept is perfect in here. xD
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I'm an idiot... Anywho... Like I said befor, awesome job! Very touching! No really, I gotta stop reviewing and go to my story... 6.6 Nya... Oh yeah, PLEASE DON'T KILL ME! |
| Dancing In The Rain 4/21/05 . chapter 1 Overall this was good. I enjoyed your imagery at the beginning, but something felt a little off. I think it was because Inuyasha was out of character in one part. I know from writing fics that it can be hard to keep a character in character. The part I'm talking about is where Inuyasha talks to Kagome about finding happiness and love. Maybe if Inuyasha said only a little bit of it, and thought most of the words it would sound better? It just seemed a little to open for him.
Well, I hope you do well in the challenge, and please, do not take this as a flame. |
| Senpai-Hibari-san 4/21/05 . chapter 1 This is good, I really liked it! Keep up the good work! ROCK ON! |
| Tobias 4/20/05 . chapter 1 Hay it's me. (STF727 for IYF).
Just let you know that you've been logged for the contest along with a few others.
Good job, you met par on the word amont with 1405 words. You also had the confession scene which included Kagome's touching of the ears, and the final line.
Good job, i'm impressed. It's been submitted for review to the other judge (Gem Stone). We should have reasults soon.
Till them - Tobias |
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