please please PLEASE FINISH BEAUTIFUL BUT DEADLY!

yay! ^^ you update! ^^ Maru is so awesome! ^^
-Miya

Sakura, Iforgot! What do you mean:"If some of you thought this last sentence was a cliff hanger, well, it's not"? MAJOR negativ-ness right there! It DID sound like a cliff hanger, and sometimes readers need a cliff hanger to cheer them up, and get them psyched about the next chappie, awaiting tons of action and funnies! Maybe even a little bit of romance...everyone has there own specific genre of stories they like. I was even psyched, until I read the;"...it's not part" part. That made me sad>.< As for MORE motivation, 'member this line: Got a problem? Go to Christ!
Yes, YOU said/wrote these very words. Don't forget! I have (more) faith in you!
Sush...again^^

Ok, Sakura! What's with the negative-ness? We will do this if it's the lat thing we do! I will help you in any way I can! We WILL make this story a success! Please, be motivated! I don't want you all mopey, it makes me sad:( I'm glad and so proud of you that you did this! It's awesome! You basically do have the entire story down, the only thing is just writing it down, and we can do this. Don't be one of those teens who give up and are down in the dumps and never try and have no 'kid' spirit left in them. Please don't be like that! Think POSITIVE! This story will rock, and we will make it a success, trust me, this will work out, it always does. Plus, God is with us. We must have faith! Ok, enough of MY worries, I'm gooing to start thinking/talking/writing POSITIVELY! It's good, and I know you have at least a part of the next chappie down, you started talking about it, right? Well, who will be the next OC's? Also, if it helps with your motivation, ask Josh to read the story, since he's an anime lover and all. That WOULD help, wouldn't it? Is he a fan of YYH? If not, then you can get him hooked on this! So he's a good drawer(you are to; don't argue with me! YOU ARE! YOU ARE! YOU ARE!) Ahem,...anywho, you can show him how awesome you are at writing! But, don't fret, we will get through this and all will turn out well! I'm glad your not going to drop the charas and let them fall into shadow like others have. I'm glad you stated that. I'm so happy! Thanx! Reply soon!
Sushimeru -^o^-

Great job, only I think that everyone is just a little bit too OOC. but then again, I'm not all that too familiar about yuyuhakusho...

Ok...i have good hygiene and crushes, so does that mean i should review?
Well, i think it's really really exciting, but you need more detail, and they need to be longer. Combine chapters, maybe. or just add more detail.
hahaha...when i was typing 'add more detail,' i wasn't looking at the keyboard, and i hit the wrong key, and i typed a-s-s, instead of a-d-d. oops!

That was sosososososososososososososo COOL!

YAYAY!
No, i don't know what that means.

i liked it, but the ending confused me. ill ask you about it tomorrow.

but it was good!-^.^-

i loved this chapter. it was so great. i love this story so far. please add more to this story soon.

This is a really cool story! please do update soon! CA'MON DO IT! IF NOT FOR ME THAN FOR MY SANITY! (not to mention the rest of the worlds^.^*) TeeHee!

Ja Na
~4-is-lovely~

Miya! Help me! I can't check my mail! I can't even log into this site! I'm so lost! But I did find the beggining books to Tokyo Mew Mew... anyways... HELP ME! and ye I'm well aware that I will not be able to delete this later because I'm not signed in... Bye Bye

Amy

I love this story! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I LOVE STORIES LIKE THIS!

your story is so compelling, now hurry up with the next chapter!

i loved your story. or did i? you'll never know. Mwahahahah!