| Reviews for Return to Red Rock |
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martini1988 4/22/05 . chapter 1 wher is part 2 ;) |
airbear23 4/22/05 . chapter 1Interesting. Can't wait to see where this goes. Please update soon. |
eridani 4/21/05 . chapter 1This is a good introductory chapter. You've put all the important issues on the table and set up your story line well. I'm looking forward to reading the rest. Update soon. |
TomcatGM 4/21/05 . chapter 1Lol. Oh, man. I'm done reading, and the "Bugme Reincarnate" line is still cracking me up. :) I love the first person approach, and I think you've handled it well. I hope you stick with Harm's POV and don't switch back and forth. Very good set up to the story, and I'm looking forward to more. TomcatGM ...Bugme Reincarnate...oh, man... |
marineJAG 4/21/05 . chapter 1Glad you decided to post this! I can't wait until you post your next chapter! Keep it coming! |
Radiorox 4/21/05 . chapter 1Hehehe, I like the start already! More please! :) |
starryeyes10 4/21/05 . chapter 1great story. |
snugglebug 4/21/05 . chapter 1Very cool! Such a great idea for a story. The potential is just endless, and I can't wait until you get the next part posted! |
dansingwolf 4/21/05 . chapter 1 yay, this is great, harm and mac gettin' some alone-time! |
zeilfanaat 4/21/05 . chapter 1Hey, this is a good start! I'd love to read more! Please update soon! |