 xxLilMizCadyxx 2009-11-22 . chapter 1Awesome sauce. I truly enjoyed every chapter. Yuffie is characterised to perfection. And my beloved Vinnie, perfect too.
I CRIED MY EYES OUT when he left the phone. My mum had to tear me away from the computer ;) |
 Negative Creep 2009-11-05 . chapter 5I don't know where you've gone, what's become of you, if you were eaten by a grue or ravaged by hobbits or choked on a Tim-Tam or what, but please, please, for the love of all that is good and beautiful in the world, finish this story. I am pleading as an old friend, here. I don't care how long it takes; patience is a virtue best learned while tearing one's hair out. Just make an ending.
I'd ask that you also keep in touch, but that's your decision and nobody else's. I hope you're doing well. |
 Alumi 2009-11-04 . chapter 1 Excuse me with my bad english, I am speaking Spanish.
It is my favorite Yuffie story ^-^ Hey it even beat Sunshine in Winter I think. It is so funny and sad I dont know if I am crying or laugh every times I am read it (3 times !). Every things about Aerith break my heart GOD I had the chills ("I was happy even if it was the end of the world: because we were all so fierce and convinced, even Cait who didn't care and Vincent who didn't smile, we had lost you and therefore we were immortal because nothing could hurt us any more" - it is nice idea she talks directly to her, it is very powerful) and every things in the bunker too. I think it becomes my new Kingdom hearts canon in my head, I like their back story more like it ^-^
You make me fan of Barret/Tifa too. They're scene together are too good they break my heart. I feel so bad for Tifa in it ;_; I feel bad for every bodys, it is depressing story but in the GOOD way!
I suppose you never update, but I want you to know it is a beautiful/terrible story and if you update one day I am impatient to see Cid!! And excuse the bad english again!
ps: Yuffie being the Reno and Rude fangirl is the most funny thing! I love it ^-^ |
 Midnight Star Gazer 2009-10-26 . chapter 6Of course. I finally find a good fic and it hasn't been update in about 15 months ... UPDATE? Please? I'm even struggling with my iPod and it's annoying spellcheck to review this, and I never do that. Plus this is the second time I've tried typing this ..
Anyways, I love this fic! I've never played FFVII and I normally only follow the main guys in KH, but I really like this fic. I know tons of people have said all this before, but still. The characterizations are great and it's not boring or badly written. Its absolutely hilarious and Yuffie makes me laugh all the time, while some parts are just a little bit creepy, especially the parts about the Heartless, but that's definitely not a bad thing.
If it's not on hiatus, please, PLEASE update? |
 hollyivy7 2009-10-11 . chapter 1okay. you made me cry and waste like 70 tissues so you better not hiatus this fic. update guardian, update! |
 kaossparrow 2009-10-11 . chapter 6You haven't updated in a year. Fix this please? For the people who love the pretty pretty story? |
 c00kiemon 2009-10-07 . chapter 6Oh wow. I loved Everything. Yuffie's voice, the plot, the characters' portrayals. I'm just a little sad that you haven't touched this story in a year. Hopefully, you'll pick this up again because it's a great story that needs an end. |
 ipsius 2009-09-02 . chapter 6 I have, to be honest, known about this story for a long time - long enough that it was back when I had just finished Kingdom Hearts and didn't know much about FFVII at all. But there's a perfectly good reason why I didn't review this story sooner (I repeat, perfectly good, not loserly or full of fail at all), and that's because it took me forever to actually bring myself to read it, because I /knew/ the second I looked at the title and read the summary that this was going to be goddamn /tragic/.
Because everything in this story hurts. The dramatic irony hurts. The love between Barret and Marlene hurts. Yuffie playing hangman with Vincent in Wutaianese hurts. Cloud mistaking the milkman for Sephiroth hurts. Even the /summary/ hurts, because damn, you have such a tremendous way with words and dark comedy and characterization and atmosphere. Your Yuffie will always be the best Yuffie, and blasphemy or not, your Yuffie is most likely even better than the real one, because every single one of your Yuffie's lines is full of snark and wit and personality and hilarious irrelevance - except when it's tragic. I love her lines to death. I even love Vincent's lines. (And do you know how remarkably rare it is to find someone who can not only write a good Yuffie but a good Vincent as well?) Because he's morose and quietly fatalistic and gravitas could be his middle name and he's /still/ playing tic-tac-toe over the phone, and it is all completely justified, because this is totally how Vincent Valentine would face the end of the world.
This story makes me glad that I played KH before I knew about FFVII. This story makes me ache. The most terrible thing is that we already know how it ends (just like how everyone knew that Zack dies like a decade before Crisis Core was even created), and that takes out any possibility of a happy ending where everyone gets what s/he deserves. (And quite frankly it sucks because I keep thinking about Sunlight in Winter where I was convinced the entire thing was going to end in tears too, but then again, that story didn't involve stuffing dead accountants into freezers, and there is just no way you can happy a story out of the great, big abyss of tragedy after you include something like /that/.)
I don't think this is everything I want to say, but we would be here forever if I actually did that, and at any rate, the only really important thing is that you're always going to be my favorite author in the entire FFVII fandom. |
 Desperate Fan 2009-08-16 . chapter 6 Please please please continue this AMAZING story! I have read and reread this fic about seven times and still think it's absolutely brilliant! I love how you capture these characters and their interactions to the foreshadowing tragedies ahead. Please finish this epic story and I will love you forever.
>:D |
 Spazaroth 2009-08-02 . chapter 1I've read this fanfic SO MANY TIMES and I NEVER get tired of it!
It's just so epic. The character of Yuffie is practically spot on. She's loud, hyper, funny and more! Her story is incredibly engaging and I can't get enough of it. Heck, I've even printed it out just so I can read it whenever and wherever.
My only problem is:
When will it be updated? :( |
 origami mimi 2009-07-07 . chapter 6This is awesome in a heart-breakingly sad/beautiful way. Leave it to Yuffie to make the end of the world funny. I think you capture her sixteen-year-old ninja bad-assery just right, and I can't describe how everything is so wonderful and terrible it makes me laugh, the Turks and Reno the Boy hooker and Vincent with a sense of humor and Reed on drugs (I laughed for about five minutes straight at "Oh god, Kisaragi, bad hell,") and Barret and Barret-and-Tifa Doing It, to quote Yuffie, and the Marleneosaur and basically anytime Yuffie opened her mouth.
A run-on sentence is the only coherent way I can express my luff for your story, as I stayed up quite late to read it all, and then read it again. Although I do wonder why Cloud suddenly went quietly morose and even more unscrewed then usual, and does Sephiroth have anything to do with it or make an appearance eventually? Because it would make sense if he did.
You deserve all the cookies in the cookiejar. I shower you with them in hopes of bribing you for another chapter of awesome world ending. There's double chocolate chip and white-chocolate macadamia and pralines. . . |
 Viper_Daisy 2009-07-04 . chapter 6 Okay, this is like the most amazing thing I've ever read, seriously. I love your Yuffie, and crazy Cloud and Vinnie and just wow. I hope you are able to update sometime because I really want to know what happens next. |
 KibaCanLickMe 2009-06-30 . chapter 6I'm pretty sure this will be a fruitless effort as you have not updated in a really long time, but I have really enjoyed the first 6 chapters of this and would love to get to read it to the end. I hope you can find it in your heart to pick up your long dead manuscript and continue the story. If not, what you've written is marvelous anyway and I had a great time reading it. |
 dude 2009-06-27 . chapter 6 orignally when you said in july i thought you ment of last year. but this year is a good july to! Pls update |
 agewa 2009-06-27 . chapter 6I finished reading this story last night... and not to sound like a creepy-crazy person, but I cried like a crazy-creepy person.
I'm not really good with expressing my like of things, but, um. Thank you very much for this fic.
I hope you continue. |
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