Wow... I think I'm crying...
So beatifully written, and I can now see Kanzeon Bosatsu as a goddess of mercy instead of being her usual pervy hag.
I really liked it! Definitely one of the greatest Gaiden fics!!

Oh my poor goku what are they trying to do to you?

I know that if konzen had of been their with kenren and tenpou none of that bullsh-t would never had happened to goku.

Thank kanzeon sama for she literally saved his life for him to torment his true master soon to be known as genjo sanzo.

The jade emporer is a punk hiding behind his title never really interested in what is happening around his heavens only if it involves his selfish **, goku/saiten taisai should have killed that stick in his ** emporer.

I really liked it. And to answer your trivia question: it's Beowulf.

This just makes me want to cry! Meaning you did a great job on this ^_^ Though it inspired a plot bunny... what if Konzen, Kenren, and Tenpou managed to gain enlightment around the same time that Saiyuki time line starts? And what they would do when they found out what happened to Goku? Sounds like a good idea... anyway thanks for the read ^_^

Oh please continue I would really like to know what happens next.^_^

Aww, that's soo sad! Poor Goku..

Well, damn! I certaintly hope you didn't discontinue this fic. It's definitely one of the best Saiyuki fics out there, and definitely the best Gaiden fic. It's so incredibly hard to find well written stories in this fandom, and even harder to find well written NON-shonen-ai/yaoi stories (since I'm not into that at all). Well, I'm going to add this fic to my alert page, and hopefully will find a new chapter waiting for me one of these days ;)

Hi ! ^_^ See ? Did what I had promised. Printed ALL your Sayuiki fics. And couldn't wait tomorrow on the train to begin and read them. So I started with that one. So... still a bit lost in this world, but I really begin to take my marks in there. I'm looking forward to your next chapter, as it's kind of taking the story at the start with this stroy.

I love this story and can't wait to see more. =^^= I hope the second chapter is coming soon.

I demand more

pleasse add another chapter soon im riveted

Please update this story! I know life is busy and I don't mean to be a pest, but this story is very poignant and beautiful.So if you get the chance, please update.

Beautiful, like all your Saiyuki work. Looking forward to more. =]

Are you saying you're looking for a picture of Goujun? Try: http://tsukiusa.hp.
And if for some reason the link doesn't work- like, because FFN is being a butt and makes it disappear- I found it by doing an image search on Yahoo with just the word "Goujun." Hope that helps.

Beowulf. Or it could be me. My roommate and I had a giant fly in our dorm room, and we named it Grendel... and then I swatted it.

Ah this one was sad Ti! Also i didn't get it the first time around... i haven't seen all of it yet though... i'd like to see this one continued soon though ^-^.

hooray gaiden fics i love 'em update soon ok thankd - zan