Reviews for The pain the Wolf hides

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Sarimia 2007-12-13 ch 1,	abuseAwesome story, just one thing bugs me though. You spell the names differently than everyone else: Shiguri is Shigure, Hitori is Hatori, and Toruh is Tohru. I wanted to point that out, don't take it as something bad! Sarii^_^
Wouldn't you like to know 2007-08-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseUm... yeah. You may have artistic liscence to create a mary sue named Rain and have her the 13th Zodiac and a wolf to boot, and shove her into the same situation as Kyo almost, it seems... but it doesn't mean the idea is very smart. Already your character has a strike against her. Her name is Hippy. Her name is RAIN. That's the same as naming someone Aura or Crystal or Flower or Moon-love. Especially in a near obvious Japanese setting with characters that have almost all Japanese names. Means you lose one point. Making her a WOLF looses you another point. Wolves, sadly, are abused by mary sues. Making her the 13th zodiac, costs you, yet again another point in creativity. There could be something to salvage, but I doubt you have what it takes, plotwise and character wise. There is no reason for a Zodiac to have a 13th hidden animal. There is no reason for one to exist. There is plot and reason for Kyo, as many other authors, readers, watchers have summarised, theorised, and plotted about. Which means, yes you can abuse the right to make Original Characters. But you lose points for it when they don't fit, when they are mary sue, or when it's just plain stupid.
xXTainted.InkXx 2007-07-21 ch 17, anon.	abuseY'know, you should make an extra chapter, showing everyone's thoughts and feelings when they find out Rain died. I'd really like to read that. ~xXT.IXx
xXTainted.InkXx 2007-07-21 ch 17,	abuse...Dead? She's dead? That's not fair. And now i'm sad. Great story, i really enjoyed reading it. But i am really sad about what happened. ~ xXT.IXx
A Forgotten Fairy. .AKA- Fa... 2007-04-13 ch 17,	abuseok im confuzzled! did she die? or did she get out?
Aliza-phantom 2006-12-14 ch 4, anon.	abuseOkay, are you a fan of the manga, or the anime? because I noticed some of the things you write are very very wrong. Or maybe you heard about the anime from a friend? and even though you hadn't seen or read it you decided to write a story about it. Could you tell me which one it is? my screename is Aliza-phantom. I was to lazy to sign in.
Me 2006-12-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseKisa's hair is orange! hence the tiger?
ihateemos 2006-08-20 ch 17,	abuse;_; i cried soo much whoot 100th reviewer
Lady Okori 2006-08-15 ch 17,	abuse...Ouch. ^^0. My eyes are really puffy and sore. I've been sniffling for at least half of the story (>>;, last half). ... This story part is part humor? ^^0. Maybe part angst is a better description. Only a good story with a good plot and past can make me cry that much (AHH...! A cry is good for you every once in a while. To relieve some stress (did that make sense? o.o)). Great story. I'm gonna go and read your other Fruit's Basket story now...^^0.
Black Panther137 2006-08-11 ch 17,	abusethat was an awsome story.Rain was a really good character the story moved me alot.that was a really good ending too. Bear137
lucy 2006-08-02 ch 17, anon.	abuseone of the BEST stories i've EVER read! i think it was sad when Hiro was a jerk to her... great character and plotline!
NekogirlovesKyo 2006-07-09 ch 10,	abusewow!! i loved this one!! Rain is so cute!! ::huggles:: -_-0 we!! anyway, goodjob! - Neko-Chan
Andea Moonfire 2006-06-29 ch 16, anon.	abuseThe story is great, bt about chapt. 16's YS at the end...yeah...im an Akito-san fan. The story is good but...GO AKITO I LUV U! huggles Akito and gets punched Ouchie! HUGGLES AGAIN TILL HE SUFFOCATES Oopsies!
Jinx-neko 2006-06-20 ch 17,	abuseThat was the best story I've ever read. And trust me I've read over 500 stories. I hope you make a sequeal. It would be great if Rain came back. I was also wondering if you would read my story and review. Noone has yet and I'm wondering how good it is. Ja Ne XP Jinx-neko
da shiz mint 2006-05-28 ch 17,	abusekewl story. Nice writing, i really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work. ^__^

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