I'm leaving a review! Yay for me! Yay for you!

Haha. I'm Dr. Seuss.

Anyhoo. Constructive, eh?

I think you've got a good start here. I'll be honest and say that I am not a fan of OCs at all, but Valentina isn't so bad. She could border on MarySue-ness, but I think you can control that easily enough. :P My only real crit of the story is Snape - he seems a bit OOC. He's just too... smooth. Some of his lines are perfectly him, but others are too Casanova-ish. Does that make sense? LOL. Could be the migraine talking.

However, I do think you've got a good fic here. Keep it up and ignore my lame-o review. :P

Lovely! Lovely! Lovely! But one question, how old is she? You know that Dumbledore is almost 100 years old and Snape was born 1960 (this fact is from the webpage of j.K Rowling.)

Update soon!

She Lives! :D

She'd better not try and kill him again! ..But she probably will.. :( ...at least once more, unless she's overtaken by his kindness ;)

Anyway, again brilliant chapter! Can't wait for more!

Hi,

sorry i didn't review earlier! I read the firsthalf but had to leave for my writers meeting.

Brilliant chapter!! I'll go read the next one.

hx...good chap!

i dont do long review...

when is the next chap?

great!

Interesting developments. Athough I find it hard to believe that if they were attracted to each other they would both have just fallen asleep!

Naturally, I want Severus to survive and have his 'wicked way' with Valentina. And for her to have a change of heart. But how that could come about I cannot imagine now. I'm curious to see what happens...

Please don't let them die, please?

NO! She can't kill him! Update soon, I wanna know what happens next!

I promised you a review, so here I am. :P

This really is excellent, Doc. (Hee, and I have the advantage of already reading the next part. :D) You know Snape is not one of my favourite characters, but I love the way you portray him. You manage, somehow, to show him as a feeling person, yet keep him as the same snarky bastard we're used to seeing at the same time.

“What’s your name?” Snape asked.

Valentina took a final sip from her glass and turned to look at him, remembering to avoid direct eye contact.

“That’s not the best way to start a conversation.” She replied.

“Well, that seems to be a pretty long name,” he replied, making sure she’d hear the sarcasm in his voice, “Do you happen to have a shorter name?”


That has to be my favourite part. So like Snape. :P

And I loffs you, too, Doc! :D

Good plot idea. I was interested enough to want to read to the end, then left wanting to know what would happen next.
Here's hoping Snape is smart enough to at least guess what she's up to and turns things around. And how about a surprise ending?