 Madee-Chan 2005-07-07 . chapter 4WHOOP WHOOP!! I'M GOOD! I TYPED HALF OF THIS!! GO ME! lol!! I love it!! Stop writing and I'LL HUNT YOU DOWN AND KILL YOU! |
 biawutnow 2005-07-06 . chapter 4yay! i was so happy to see an update only thing i suggest is making a bit clearer bout location of characters. UPDATE OR I GET A MACHETE OF MY OWN!! hee im hyper i just got asked out *squeal* UPDATE |
 Aberrant Bliss 2005-07-05 . chapter 4Ooh! *squee* Beautiful chapter! *tears* Yes I'm proud of you! (weird...) Well I'm being short in review today so BYE BYE!
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 Aberrant Bliss 2005-06-29 . chapter 3Oh! Plot thickens!! (Sorry I didn't review! Interent wasn't working!)
Beautiful chapter! ^_^ Scary...STARVING!! Ha ha! Wow I'm hyper. &_& (Whoa, weird face)
Once again, awesome! ^_^
Lovely!
I'm out of things to say! ^_^
*Go me, go me...* *Dances around*
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 timeless13 2005-06-28 . chapter 3a!
how can you end a chapter there? hurry up! oh my god, akito is so evil! hurryhurryhurryhurryhurryhurry! come on, i'll die if you take to long!1 this is awesome! |
 biawutnow 2005-06-28 . chapter 3 Nice, suspensful chapter. Plz update, |
 timeless13 2005-06-25 . chapter 2awesome! wow, glad i could help. and i'm so relieved that you're still writing this! i was worried! this is so cool, it seems like it would be like, WAY hard to incorporate everybody in, and still be going deep into the characters. this is such a great story. i love the stuff with momiji, you've inspired me to write more in choices. i am gonna finish it, but i'm having a very lazy summer...anyway, keep going! hurry! can't wait! ooh, and also, this stuff with hatori/kana is HEARTBREAKING! poor hatori...anyways, hurry up! |
 biawutnow 2005-06-15 . chapter 2YAY! YOU UPDATED! WO! *glomps* I really liked this chap and I hope kana remembers about hari. And what is Akito plotting??! |
 animedemonnayorin (AKA lazy bu 2005-06-10 . chapter 2 Hi! Sorry I didn't log in. WAY too lazy. (But by the time I've written this, I would be logged in, right?)
ANYWAY...
Good chapter! I found it funny and interesting. I like the hallmark thing. Ha ha.
ANYWAY...
MORE! NOW!! >:)
Sorry.
Thanks!
~BYE~
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 timeless13 2005-05-21 . chapter 1 not signing in cuz it won't let me do two reviews for one chapter. all i have to say is:
wah! please update soon! this is killing me! *sobs uncontrolably until she updates* |
 biawutnow 2005-05-01 . chapter 1Update! U must! This story is very good, awesome job of capturing their personalities. |
 timeless13 2005-04-29 . chapter 1hey, you know what this is really great and interesting and YOU STOLE MY IDEA! lol. jk. really, this is fascinating! very good. kept in character, but going deeper, you know? well, yeah, you wrote it, but that's what i'm sayin'. anyways, you should keep going. definitely. this is excellent. |
 LadyRinUchiha 2005-04-26 . chapter 1col...
can we see akito's diary?? :P |
 fdiw 2005-04-24 . chapter 1very intristing im glad your doing somthing origanal ( sorry cant spell for my life) and you did it well so 15 total points to you yay! |
 Aaya 2005-04-24 . chapter 1I'm crazy for Furuba too! It's my favorite manga/anime. My favorite characters are Hiro, Kyo, and Momiji. I really like your diary entry for Momiji! It is SO ADORABLE! Keep writing. (ooh, I luv this so much!) I'm sorry, am I being gushy? |