its not crappy its realy good and i don't say that to alot of pellie fan fics.

What are you talking about? Crappy?! I LOVED IT! It was so a.m.a.z.i.n.g. I loved it so much! In fact, I love all of your stories.

Adorable. Simply adorable.
Although I wish you had expanded the 'moment after' scene a bit more instead of jumping straight ahead to later. Ah, well.
Still adorable.

I love it! what do you mean it's crappy? I see no crap! I love all your stories and you have done a simply brillient job on this one! well done! By the way, what was the the anme of the book they were reading in English?

Never thought of Ellie and Paige together before, but now that I think about it, it makes a lot of sense. Great story, dude.

Oh wow.

That was...

Wow.

I really, really liked this. It was really good. I mean, all of your old stuff was great, but this is a step up, this is just plain amazing. You've really become a great writer. Keep up the great work!

-nikki g.

Oh, and by the way, I actually updated Ready or Not. It's the last chapter, just in case you wanted to check it out.

Oh my god, that had to be the cutest and sweetest thing I've ever read! I love Pellie, and I love this fic. It was really well written, and like I said before, really freakin' cute!

wow...youre a really goob writer...write the next chap ASAP

omg, I love it. I'm a major Pellie fan and that one was just absolutely awesome. I was crackign up silently at the end

omgod ...that was hot. awesome seriously. you have to write more.have to! it was really mind blowing,i mean, i had never thought of them like that. good job.

Aw. I loved this story, I wish that there could be more like it out there. I am so sick of reading stories that I don't relate to and I love the idea of Paige and Ellie getting together. Keep up the good work, maybe even write a single. Oh and if you ever get inspiration again(please do!) could you write another story dealing with two girls falling for one another? That would be so awesome.

that was pretty good!!

This was really, really good. I don't really know what else to say about it except that I loved it.

Well...wow. And I meant it, Wow. I like the little plot in your story...the fact it made ElliePaige. M...femmeslash...

-giggles-

I think it was a sweet twist when Paioge found out that the book was empty, nothing was awkward, nothing was crap. It was all flowing and beautiful. Great job! ^-^

~ Val

omg that was a really great story you should write more i'd give you a cookie