I checked your profile page and whoa, there it was, Harvest Moon! I laughed about the dream. The Anime loving Kerichi got suckered into buying this plant that thrives best on some remote mountaintop and now grumbles as she trudges up to water the darn thing. I think she dreams about it too, lol.

Harvest Moon is such a cute game, and this is a very cute ficlet. Nice touch, it being a dream and the kisses and laughter about it before the couple goes back to sleep to dream "real dreams". ^_^

Oh wow, that ending sure was a twist. I was getting so depressed as I was reading it--people dying, BLTs with the LT on the side... so sad! And then everything completely flipped, and it was like a burden lifted from my shoulders--seriously. Haha, I liked that effect.

This was a great idea, and your vocabulary is superb.
Now your grammar, on the other hand, needs a little work. PM me if you'd like some sentence by sentence critiques of how certain punctuation should be handled. Or just break out that good ol' English text book! Either way... :)

Lyndsey

Aww, that was kinda cute...but odd, in a special way XD. Poor Jack, and poor Ann...heh heh...

O_o Uh...ha...okay...