short and sweet!! youre an excellent writer, but you must keep something in mind...whenever a new person talks, it becomes a new paragraph. it was all squished together and got a bit confusing when there was dialouge. also, in the last chapter, there was a lot of "so"s and "well"s, but it was cute :) keep up your writing!!

xx
Amy

Hey - great story! I read Mr. Monk And The Closure and loved it. I saw you were like..the only one with a Sideways fic, and lacking reviews, so my friend and I decided to give you a few. Great story!! I really really really want to see the movie. My mom saw it and liked it. I think Paul Giamatti's amazing, so that's the main reason i want to see it. But anyway, I liked this a whole lot. I'm not very good with short stories like this - mine end up like...17 chapters. Anyway, I hate when people don't read or review. I have a Cinderella Man fic up and I haven't had much traffic for it yet, and I'm feelin kinda bad. If you've seen the movie, you can read it if you want to. If you haven't, you can anyway. haha. Great job on this, I liked it a lot!!

Best Wishes,
-MJ