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| TasteinMen 2007-08-14 ch 1,  | abuseSo, Donnie gets the first word honours, huh? Very sweet and amusing. |
| ash 2006-07-22 ch 1, anon. | abusewow thats soo cute you should write some more where they find more stuff |
| PattyW 2006-02-18 ch 1, | abuseThis is adorable. It just might have happened too! Thank you, I enjoy your stories very much. |
| Hakkai - Gojyo - Goku - San... 2005-11-18 ch 1, | abuseAw...Cute! Baby Charlie's first word. I love it! |
| Bloodsuckers37 2005-06-03 ch 1, | abuseWell, I noticed that this was untitled and I needed a break from my studying, so I took a look at this story. If you are taking suggestions for a title, might I suggest "Spring-cleaning." I think that that would be cute. Speaking of cute, that was a really cute story! There's a lot of formating problems though. Thanks for the entertaining break! |
| Lewisa Clark 2005-05-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery sweet! I could just see Alan going back to "father" mode, telling the boys to clean up their mess, etc. Great story! |
| Kado shujin Sara 2005-04-24 ch 1, | abuseAww...how cute. x3 |
| ladyjr16 2005-04-23 ch 1, | abuseaw how sweet ^^ |
| Padfoot4ever 2005-04-22 ch 1, | abuseaww cute! Great job! |
| A-blackwinged-bird 2005-04-22 ch 1, | abuseVery cute. Made me feel like a fly on the wall. :) Thanks for sharing! |
| Black Squirrel 2005-04-22 ch 1, | abuseThis is way too good to be a one chapter story! You have a wonderful set up here for further exploration into the boys' past - the good and the bad. Don't stop here! |
| deichtine 2005-04-22 ch 1, | abuseI like! Very sweet. That don would be Charlie's first word is priceless. |
| Scifi-warper 2005-04-22 ch 1, | abuseCool story. Great insight into the boys as kids. Oh, I can just imagine Don going beat red about the bragging. But hey, he can't blame himself he was six. |
| Jen 2005-04-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseLol. You know what? I can so see that happening, Charlie's first word being his big brother's name. I was sitting here reading this going, 'the first word is going to be Don. I just know it'. I was close. lol. |