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Mistress DragonFlame
2008-03-30
ch 1,
abuseHo crap, I wasn't expecting that.
Hoku ala
2006-08-02
ch 1,
abuseSesshoumaru!
Please Continue!
Chelsea
2006-04-24
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow...interesting...I really liked it. The details were great. I coud picture everything. Great job! Please continue!!
Vixen Of The Flame
2005-09-13
ch 1,
abuseI like it really it's different from most. Keep at it
bluepyro
2005-09-06
ch 1, anon.
abusethis is a great fic! update soon ok?!
lol,i never thought of keiko/sess pairing ^_^

-bluepyro
ThePioden
2005-07-24
ch 1,
abuseOoh! Ooh! So very, very awesome!
Pioden wants to see what happens next... *whine*
No, I'm serious. This is teh uber-cool. You win at life and such.
Also: E... lovely writing style. Very... Terry Pratchett-esque. ^.^ Sweet.
Hikagi
2005-06-19
ch 1,
abuseLike many of the others, I too would love to see what would happen next. The first person point of view makes this very interesting (mostly because it was done so well) and a thrilling read. I thank you for that.

Please do continue!
sakurahime
2005-05-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseoh, what's gonna happen next? i wanna know. please update soon!
juvenile peach
2005-05-19
ch 1,
abusevery interesting!
ex
2005-04-27
ch 1, anon.
abusehmm...
jan
2005-04-27
ch 1, anon.
abusenice! next chapter please?
Ahnkitomi
2005-04-26
ch 1,
abuseheh! Keiko, inter-dimensional traveller/hostess. (KIDTH)
Maribel
2005-04-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseDefinitely different from most other fics. I wonder what's going to happen next? Anyway, so far I think you're doing great with the 1st person pov. The challenge will come in seeing how you deal with it as the story progresses as that's where most authors start going really out of character.

It's good so far though!
Fluffy-Stalker
2005-04-24
ch 1,
abuseawesome
StarLadle
2005-04-23
ch 1,
abusegreat fic! i wonder what's gonna happen now?

hope ya update soon!
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