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Stationary Love
2009-06-20 . chapter 18
This was lovely. Very well done.
Silver Butterfly07
2009-06-17 . chapter 18
I don't think I ever really considered Wesley and Willow a pairing, or considered them as one that I would ever read or enjoy. But I must say...this was incredibly exquisite. I absolutely loved this, loved everything about it, and I especially loved their chemistry--how they interacted. It was amazing.

--Silver
Clairful
2008-07-16 . chapter 18
This is, by far, one of the most beautiful stories I've read.
Cardio Necrosis
2008-06-25 . chapter 15
Very sexy and well-written and jsut plain old hot. Very well-written. And sexy beyond measure.

Well I'm tired poppet I shall read more tomorrow.
Cardio Necrosis
2008-06-25 . chapter 14
That snogging scene was hot. And sexy. And just brilliantly written. And I"m glad you had Weslkey have teh presence of mind to ask the smart question. It always kind of bothers me when people forget to ask about protection in fanfics, because it jsut feels so . . . I don't know, like they just want to write a sex scene, and not ahve the characters act like responsible adults.

Anyway great job.
Cardio Necrosis
2008-06-25 . chapter 13
Great job, once again.

Sorry this review kinda sucks.
Cardio Necrosis
2008-06-25 . chapter 12
I'm glad Wesley was honest with WIllow. It shows that he is becoming more confident and brave. And I am glad that Willow did not become upset, because I think she realizes that he had good intentions, and she is too kind to be mean and feak out on him.
Cardio Necrosis
2008-06-25 . chapter 11
Oh God that would be so embarrassing, having a motorcycle accident kind of thing on the way to the date.
Cardio Necrosis
2008-06-24 . chapter 10
I loved hwo they wre both contemplating what that kiss meant, and whether or not they were dating. It was such a real moment. And they both were in character.
Cardio Necrosis
2008-06-24 . chapter 9
Oh nice. It's liek their first date. Kinda. I like that they were nervous. It was well-written and a very fun chapter to read.

Also, any mention of Bruce Willis gets a high five from me.
Cardio Necrosis
2008-06-24 . chapter 8
Awesome chapter. I love their first kiss, it was sweet and well written.

I love how he opened up to her finally, about everything he felt and about what he did in Sunnydale, and why he doesn't want her blabbing about him.

Very cute chapter, and well thought out.
Cardio Necrosis
2008-06-24 . chapter 7
Wow.

Really fantastic writing here, mate. I think this is my favourite chapter so far. What happened between him and Oz was awesome. I'm glad you didn't turn this into an Ozbash fic, because that ruins Oz. Oz had her best intentions in mind, and I'm glad you saw that and didn't turn him into a prat just for the purpose of the ship at hand.

Great job.
Cardio Necrosis
2008-06-24 . chapter 6
Hahaha I liked Wesley being so forward with Manny, and also his confidence with Willow near the end.

This is a ver ycute story, not only about romance and falling for Wes, but about moving on and gaining confidence in oneself. Great job on portraying that.
Cardio Necrosis
2008-06-24 . chapter 5
Aw cute!

I could feel the tension between them, especially when he was behind her. That was very well written.
Cardio Necrosis
2008-06-24 . chapter 4
This was cute--I loved how desperate Wesley was to keep Willow with him, and I loved the awkwardness between them when she was going to leave.
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