Very excellent for not knowing english very well. Very very good. I could understand it pretty well and from what I understand you wrote it was a very good story. Poor 004! :)

Rw77.

me da gusto que te hayas atrevido a publicar en ingles...

Aunque no era el fanfic, es bueno ver que publicaste otro y el que tu elegiste...

y con el caso de la traduccion, creeme e tenido muchos mas errores que tu... (e tenido problemas en ingles, especial GRAMMAR,ESTE AÑO:S)

Te deseo suerte y sigue publicando ya que todavia habemos los que nos tomamos el tiempo para leer fan fics!

ADIOS!

NOTE: fOR THOSE THAT READ THIS STORY, PLEASE READ IT. And apologize the author so she can corrected it an so you can read it well...

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(not to spoil the story for anyone else) At first I thought it was ... but then it turned out to be ...What a real kicker of a twist in how you wrote this. Wonderful wonderfuly written!