another interesting chapter. very well written, and Jumba's dialogue was very well done! you're certainly keeping everyone in character, and doing a great job of it.

this chapter just brings more questions, why is Jumba being so secretive? where is Stitch? what's gonna happen next? man, so cliffhanging! keep up the excellent work!

This is a cool story and very well written. I hope you update soon.

my...God...

this story just keeps getting better and better! man, this was another fantastic chapter! you know how to build suspense, and how to keep your readers guessing, and i find that one of the key elements in a story.

ok, the writing was great, everything is fitting together perfectly. the part about Stitch thinking Snooping was some sort of dessert was cleverly funny! i know there's some sort of huge threat to whatever jumba's doing, and it seems to concern Lilo. man, this is great! update soon, and keep up the good work!

sorry about the late review, 's been down for awhile...

okay, another great chapter. i like it how the girls are thinking about a mutiny with mertle...hehe, that'll show her!

another well written, interesting chapter. keep it up!

Amazing! i love how much your writing has improved. i mean it was great before, but now it's...stupendous! i love how you are showing flashbacks of the night lilo lost her parents, and i suspect that there was some borg activity involved in the death? hmm, VERY good plot!

this is certainly going on my favorites, keep up the great, wonderful work!

I agree with dragonfanman, I was so dissapointed when this story was cut, I thought that it was really planned out. But the important thing is that you got the story back up again, although slightly different. If this story has changed a lot from its original form then I think that Jumba was actually checking a Borg nanoprobe. That's my hypotesis. Update soon!

YES! the story's back! hope you get the rest of it up soon Markey!