That was an excellent tale. Very classy useing a bean to make Bulma into a sayain instead of the dragonballs like most would.

you gave a headache...

trying to translate it...

It's not fair... but it sure was funny...

Ah this is an aweomse fic. You really captured the personality of each character well. Except I don't think Krillin would be so willing to go to Vegeta's age.
The language thing was really clever.. And it sounds awesome when you say it out loud XD
Keep up the good work!

*adds story to my Favourite Stories list*

funny. you have my full attention.

Your story was pretty good. I wish you would have informed your readers that the translations were provided for at the bottom in your notes at the beginning of the story; I was a little frustrated by reading backwards, but I have to admit it was a very creative idea. Other than translation, I thought your story was entertaining. Good work!

Awesome, I actually got it after cursing a few minutes of reading the first paragraph got it all the way till Bulma started running her mouth so I said screw the last part but I got Vegeta's line.

You seriously made all this up? The language, the side effects, everything? You have way too much time on your hands. Your story was...ok. It was cute and entertaining. have you know that i transolated everything on my own before i read the transolations at the bottom. And no, it didnt take long becasue i am good at reading stuff backwards. Anyway, that was pretty impressive how you thought up all the side effects and everything. Just like it where real...

Good ideas however i would tell people that there are translations at the bottom cause some people may not be good at working all that Saiyan out. Other people may find it amuzing (me)however some people may give up which would be a shame cause the story is good.

Heh, well, I hade been planing to read this when it was posted, which...was a long time ago..But, I saved it to my desk top, and put it in a folder, hoping i wouildn't forget it..but, i did, and now i found it!

It seems like a more likely way of things happening, since, hte saiyans are pertty primal. Great job!

good story! up date and dont give up on it^^

why isnt the real dbz this way. hahahahahahaha!!

THIS IS SOO FUNNY!

Nice.

Bueno, es una buenisima historia me encanto, se me dio un poco de problema leer, pero estuvo bueno.

Cool idea,