Hard to follow in some places, but the writing was good enough to make up for that... really so good it left me speachless. Woderful.

love the use of brackets and some very powerful little scenes. only criticism it that it was a tad hard to follow in places though.

Wow, I'm speechless. This is... great. (For my utter lack of better words) I'm usually not so much a fan of the fact of Orodreth being Angrod's son (just my personal opinion, I'm quite a sticker to the published QS, nevermind ;)), but well, these are formalities and your story goes so far beyond that. And it's so utterly sad, too!