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| E 2006-10-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was good. It actually sent shivers down my spine. It's always been my belief that Wyatt was good at the beginning and that it wasn't until after Piper's death when he started to give in to the dark side. Oh the seed was planted when he was younger but he didn't abandon his mother's teachings until after her death. |
| beautifulholly 2006-06-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis story is great. it is truly amazing. It seems like a professional wrote it |
| Nathy1000000 2005-06-27 ch 1, | abuseI really liked it. I loved Wyatt's change and Chris seeing it. Even then Wyatt wanted to be there for Chris, it was sweet even in a twisted way. I love Chris'feelings and how bad he felt at how stupid Leo was. But was it a one shot? It really seemed like the begining of a good story. |
| jenna51980 2005-04-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseAh! You got me hooked and now you've stopped! I don't suppose if I look pathetic enough, that you'd continue? Pretty plwease? Loved the scenario, loved how you didn't make Leo the bad guy but rather a well meaning if misguided father (I'm not that fond of Leo, but I dislike how most people write him so one sided). Kudos to you! |
| heartfallen 2005-04-22 ch 1, | abuseThat was so well written, the plot and grammar. I really liked the last line. Great story. keep up the good work |
| Kay the Klutz 2005-04-22 ch 1, | abuseI liked it. I really don't think that Wyatt did try to hide his evil nature from anyone when it started to control him-- just not his style-- but whatever works for the plot! |