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Reviews For: Tea at St Mungo's

Bad Mum
2007-11-14
ch 1,
abuseI enjoyed that. You have captured Bill and the twins really well.
Windswift
2005-12-15
ch 1,
abuse...Nice. Just generally entertaining and all around good. Short and sweet and fits in well.

-Windswift
Nosilla
2005-06-27
ch 1,
abuse“We’re so sorry, but we couldn’t get away…would you like some of these signed photos, Mrs. Weasley?”

BWAHAHHAA!!

I laughed when I read that. My brother stared at me. And my dog barked. And I had to get back in my chair.
All fun.
Lizzy3
2005-06-23
ch 1,
abuseI haven't the foggiest idea why you haven't had more reviews m'dear. You really are a fantastic writer; the characters were captured perfectly, especially Fred and George. Anyway, it just goes to show what poor taste some people... Well, needless to say, I'd like some more from you!
Diminished Seventh
2005-05-27
ch 1,
abuseCute and plausible, and I am very envious of how well you write Fred and George. You captured their voices perfectly!
Ligia Elena
2005-05-19
ch 1,
abuseA fun, believable little side story, with a hint of the darkness of that time around the edges, which I liked. You have a good grasp of the characters. I enjoyed it!
MyPreciousss188
2005-05-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis was a very funny story! I thought that you captured the character's personalities very well and also gave a very clear picture of how each character interacts with the others. I did notice that sometimes the wording you used made sentences difficult to understand, but that did not happen very often. This was hillarious!
MyPrecious188
fledge
2005-04-23
ch 1,
abuseA pretty little ficlet; you've done a good job with Bill, really, who of course will be a lot more ardent admirer than elder brother. Sometimes perhaps a bit hard to follow the dialog without any clues as to who says what. But I guess it can be sorted out eventually.
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