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| Bad Mum 2007-11-14 ch 1, | abuseI enjoyed that. You have captured Bill and the twins really well. |
| Windswift 2005-12-15 ch 1, | abuse...Nice. Just generally entertaining and all around good. Short and sweet and fits in well. -Windswift |
| Nosilla 2005-06-27 ch 1, | abuse“We’re so sorry, but we couldn’t get away…would you like some of these signed photos, Mrs. Weasley?” BWAHAHHAA!! I laughed when I read that. My brother stared at me. And my dog barked. And I had to get back in my chair. All fun. |
| Lizzy3 2005-06-23 ch 1, | abuseI haven't the foggiest idea why you haven't had more reviews m'dear. You really are a fantastic writer; the characters were captured perfectly, especially Fred and George. Anyway, it just goes to show what poor taste some people... Well, needless to say, I'd like some more from you! |
| Diminished Seventh 2005-05-27 ch 1, | abuseCute and plausible, and I am very envious of how well you write Fred and George. You captured their voices perfectly! |
| Ligia Elena 2005-05-19 ch 1, | abuseA fun, believable little side story, with a hint of the darkness of that time around the edges, which I liked. You have a good grasp of the characters. I enjoyed it! |
| MyPreciousss188 2005-05-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was a very funny story! I thought that you captured the character's personalities very well and also gave a very clear picture of how each character interacts with the others. I did notice that sometimes the wording you used made sentences difficult to understand, but that did not happen very often. This was hillarious! MyPrecious188 |
| fledge 2005-04-23 ch 1, | abuseA pretty little ficlet; you've done a good job with Bill, really, who of course will be a lot more ardent admirer than elder brother. Sometimes perhaps a bit hard to follow the dialog without any clues as to who says what. But I guess it can be sorted out eventually. |