   Zuzanny 9/2/09 . chapter 5How interesting. What happens next? |
| Pilgrem of the Old School 3/22/08 . chapter 5 This is a very good story with lost of potential and interesting elements. Keep up the good work |
| wkent 3/13/08 . chapter 5 Sweet looking forward to the conclusion. |
| Red Leader 10/10/07 . chapter 5 This cant be. Update soon. |
| Red Leader 10/10/07 . chapter 3 Getting interesting with every chapter. |
| Red Leader 10/10/07 . chapter 2 awesome chapter. |
| Red Leader 10/10/07 . chapter 1 This story is great, keep writing. |
| Fleurdetemps 7/2/07 . chapter 1 Looks good so far...still reading. ;) |
| archiev 6/26/07 . chapter 5 I really hope you have plans to continue this. |
| ApocSM 8/3/06 . chapter 5 WOW! I LOVE THIS STORY, MUY BUENO! YOU DID A SUPERB JOB ON THE PLOT! UPDATE REAL SOON! |
| Penny 7/30/06 . chapter 5 What can I say but WOW! Great characterizations and dialog that was really, really enjoyable. Update early and often. |
| DuQuesne 7/20/06 . chapter 5 BOY!, you killed a Gaim! You fiend foe!
(Otherwise I expect the obnoxious character of Jack O'Neil'c to die) |
| Evilclone 7/20/06 . chapter 5 An update Finally! |
| Heather 7/19/06 . chapter 5 Wicked, will Daniel meet and talk with Kosh? looking forward to reading more. Thank you so very much for writing. |
| SidheLaila 9/19/05 . chapter 4 Hey! I've read this chapter the day after it came out, and now its really the only fanfic I'm reading and I love it, however I would like to have an update? *Hint*Hint*Wink*Wink*Nudge*Nudge* :-D The Tecno Mage thing was really a suprise...I like suprises!
Chao! |
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