i just love that ending. do I WANT to know? XD

Heh, great stuff.

I hate how 16 year olds like you have so much writing talent. Seriously. This read so much better than most Day-In-The-Life-of-the-Turks shit out there.

LOL I love the way your dialouge flows. Also still a little edgy, but funny. Rude's a perfect straight man for Reno, you write them very well.

Good job, I especially like the Vegan line,

somthing like this would be good to just.. I dont know, Print out and leave somwhere... *shrug*
I might have to, depending on my bordom.

Heh. Nice birthday present.

I laugh.

well well well...its Tonya!! wo! i decided to make an account so i can watch u like a hawk!! i mean...read your stories...yes.."stories". anyways!! im glad you did write me another story, lol i didnt think u'd finish it so fast!i likez it...hehe just as good as my last birthday one. lol you buying cat food...what a crock. but yup...now ill be thinking twice before i blow in your ear you sex maniac!! hehe jk =P