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Nyte Kit
2008-09-13 . chapter 9
I ended up going back through and re-reading this entire story in order to reorient myself with it. And, yet again, I'm glad that I had a reason to, due to your update. I love the way you have all of the cases coming together through the chapters. But even more, I love the emotions you brought into the story with the "Nightmare Nightclub." I'm still trying to figure out exactly what Hiei's intentions were with Yusuke. Sure, once he removed the Belt he seemed much more sexual, but finding the drugs seemed to upset him more than the turn of the night's events. Great job keeping him in the shadows. And although you said it may only be for this act of the story, I enjoyed the tidbits of the past between Yusuke and Kurama. Wonderful job so far and please update soon!
Demon Hiei's Girl
2008-01-25 . chapter 8
Yusuke, Hiei, (and from what I understood) naked on top of each other on a bed. I can't help but like where this is going. I'm not sure when this was last update, but I hope it didn't get abandoned at this particular spot. haha
GoldxSilence
2006-07-07 . chapter 8
fuck! more more more more more! Cliffy i hate cliffy! let me know when more chapters are up please!
thanks a lot!
meikouhaikitsune
2006-01-02 . chapter 8
UPDATE! I am hooked on your story, probably because I am sadistic but stil. you have gotto update Please.ja
Duzen Broken DreamZ
2005-12-16 . chapter 8
okay... I am a bit confuzzled but dont'cha worry... I will figure it out sooner or later (meaning sooner) because I probably just skipped something like what i usually do... so... once again... awesome!
Nyte Kit
2005-12-14 . chapter 1
ok, this is actually a review for chapter 8, but for some reason my computer won't let me review on that chapter. but anyway, yet again, nice job with including the Yogore leaf. this time with our favorite fox. i wonder why he allowed himself to take the drug, though. it can't be just to change back to his former self. there has to be a reason. and what's the thing going on with the Royal Belt? i'm a bit confused about what that is, exactly. thinking about, Koenma and Shizuru?! that i didn't see coming! and now Yusuke's pissed. well, oh-freakin-well! after that interesting little trip down memory lane with Kurama and those druggies, it seems like Yusuke was a bit of a male whore. like a demon Youko Kurama in Yusuke's body. it's interesting, to say the least. so, are Hiei and Yusuke gonna get it on? or will he say no and eventually go back to Kurama? or neither? or maybe he'll do the whore thing again? either way, nice job on this chapter. though i'm a tad confused, it was still interesting. update soon!
meikouhaikitsune(nlg)
2005-12-14 . chapter 8
how the hell do you end it right there. I wait that long for a cliffy TT.TT not fair. ANY way wicked chapter. update soon.Hiei oohh your bad im tellin. Kurama Yusuke's cheating on you lol later
meikouhaikitsune
2005-10-19 . chapter 1
You HAVE gOt To UPDATE! I love your story with a passion
meikouhaikitsune
2005-10-06 . chapter 7
I love your story. I don't even care if others think it's wrong you just described my family. between my brothers I think that one resembles Yusuke and I don't know Im hooked please update soon. later
Nyte Kit
2005-09-16 . chapter 7
very nice. i had to go back and re-read the entire story to understand it, but it was well worth it. i love how you're tying all of these cases together with the drug influence. and i believe that the Yogori (is that how you spell it?) Leaf and the Black Suicide are the same, except the drug comes from the leaf. am i right? also, the way you depicted Kiriko's death was so perfect. i really liked the "angel's" inclusion in there. nice work! and the way you keep including Yusuke's personal mission is great. you do it in a subtle way, but it always fits with the chapter. and this one was no different. great job and update soon!
Duzen Broken DreamZ
2005-09-15 . chapter 7
o0o make more chappies please! this is so damn good!
Duzen Broken DreamZ
2005-09-15 . chapter 6
o.O
Duzen Broken DreamZ
2005-09-15 . chapter 5
o0o0o this is good so far... ::sniffles: poor Saiki!
Duzen Broken DreamZ
2005-09-15 . chapter 4
o0o0o this is weird... Saiki named his song Yukina... hm... need to read... is the need for speed... speed as in game not drug... ok?
Duzen Broken DreamZ
2005-09-15 . chapter 3
hehehehe... sorry i need to laugh at the last part of this chapter with kurama's praise and hiei's little stealing thing... HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! ok... srry, and we move on...
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