Nicely written, but certainly different than what I was thinking Vincent saw. Oh well, still nice.

Perfect.

You've captured a very deep, thought-provoking moment, and spun it into something even more.

The beginning was already a twister, and the ending was strong and final. You did a good job with this, and I really did enjoy it.

I don't know why, but I just had a sudden mood for Collateral fanfiction. :) I think you've slaked my thirst, and I thank you. Good job.

-Emelie

"It is a contradiction, an anomoly, an apparent impossibility, but it is a truth."

-Charles Dickens

This had a lot of interesting points, written excellently. *nods*

Welcome to the Collateral world and do post more Collateral fiction :)

Piper